INTRANSIT
on quarter-step (abridged) by richa
23 Aug 2003, 7:42 AM
This edges something of a marriage, to me. I would say: Just (ours).
Is it possible you were mistaking the hurt for deep connection?
"I took a bite" really? did she kick you in the face afterwards? lol.
heres a 9.
I know you thought you were gonna see some gore, but no.. i cheated you! just to be an asshole. ;)
blessed with 7. enjoyed reading it.
Sweet child, interesting experience. LOVE
did Mr. Giggles like that? ;)
I NEVER KNEW HOW FUN IT IS TO KILL TILL NOW! ITS FUCKING WONDERFULL! I FEEL LIKE A MILLION DOLLARS!
i agree about the two different poems.....it seems to split somewhere along the way.
anyway...very nice.
2 things i don't like though: "angel dancing on its head"-its sort of a silly line and it doesn't fit.
also the last line would work beautifully-if it were a different poem. i don't know, it just doesn't seem to go with this one.
I finally got this poem, after reading it today. I've read it several times before, without catching on what it meant. This time, I could picture the poet (pre-stretch marked) mimicking their movements. I imagine this is a part of the poet's self that she mourns, but in all actuality, never lost.
I wonder what a dream dictionary would say about this one!
I think it shows courage and a lot of empathy to carry the dead fox into the woods.
I wonder if you were feeling like the dead fox?
Did you have a cleaning on the same day, after finding her in your closet?
and after you "climb into her nestbed" ??
I have roaches in my building, for the first time in my life. Some have, like, twenty legs, long antennae, and spots.
I would describe the roaches.
Sweet friendship, but, isn't this a perfect example of how we're set up to not be close with the ones we love?
Sweet child, interesting experience. LOVE
This edges something of a marriage, to me. I would say: Just (ours).
I'll have to look this up in a dream dictionary.
Do you feel a resemblance to these characters?
Interesting that the cat played such a significant role in your awakening.
Are you guys enmeshed, or what?
I mean, deep connection for hurt?
LuckyJoe, dont get mad, im just trying to make you laugh at yourself, its theraputic.