Re: Lying in the Snow, Crazy? Yes. by D. $ Fontera	nentwined 76.167.62.172	19-Feb-07/4:15 PM
hmm.
Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717	nentwined 76.167.62.172	19-Feb-07/4:16 PM
Maybe a nice quick lyric.
Re: Polite refusal by Stephen Robins	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 63.212.164.26	19-Feb-07/5:48 PM
My suit is fitted with a drawstring so I can hoist the vent canopy any time I please; as a single venter you have merely to park your hands in your pockets and watch in horror as the tails part like soiled drapes.
Re: Why I’m Homeless by Dovina	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	19-Feb-07/5:55 PM
What image are you going for? Where is the image? That's all.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	19-Feb-07/5:57 PM
Yes rockmage, embrace the darkside, enjoy it's cold return. ARHARHAR, me cullies.
Re: Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	19-Feb-07/6:00 PM
wtf?
Re: Here are the wipes by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	19-Feb-07/6:01 PM
Topnotch sir.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	19-Feb-07/6:05 PM
The lines: Loving the grass delighting my bare soles, & In the grey on grey of false dawns. desperately needs reconsideration. You need to redo the beginning really. Six.
Re: Polite refusal by Stephen Robins	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	19-Feb-07/6:11 PM
I'm going to print this out and burn it outside the steps of the college I end up attending after my pilgrimage through the wastelands of american existence. That aside, have a ten, you cad.
Re: Mexican Monday by A_Dark_Calm	Lola 61.17.226.26	20-Feb-07/8:57 AM
Yes, Mexican Monday will bring you your girl. Love this piece.
Re: the one by crystal4	nentwined 76.167.62.172	20-Feb-07/12:25 PM
nope
Re: Mexican Monday by A_Dark_Calm	Dovina 75.82.86.162	20-Feb-07/3:47 PM
Ah, the insensitivity of lovers to the intricacy of words, to the seemingly unwitting lush outsiders feel, to the goddess whims of the neglected, or angelic twitters of the left. To be in love is a splendid thing, far better than poetry or idle chat. Best wishes.
Re: Remembering Nick by jessicazee	drnick 24.247.112.155	21-Feb-07/10:26 PM
nobody named nick is worth remembering
Re: The exile returns by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	22-Feb-07/6:15 AM
Perhaps you could explain to the collective of poemrankers how your legs have expanded over the course of the last few years. Is it not true that the bulging repletion of your thighs has caused you to wear clowns trousers? Has this not led you being addressed in the Royal Courts of Scunthorpe as Fraser Allonby Queen's Clown? Further, is not also true that the self same expansion of your legs has made it quite impossible for you to locate your penis leading to you being known on the circuit as Fraser Allonby Quo Gallo?
Re: The exile returns by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	nentwined 76.167.62.172	22-Feb-07/11:10 AM
Welcome back. :)
Re: A New Deal by oneglove	oneglove 24.216.70.145	22-Feb-07/10:20 PM
based on the bonus march during the depression. i've been fighting with it but it's a work in progress, it just feels generally weak to me. so i guess i'm mainly looking for some help.
regarding some deleted poem...	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249	23-Feb-07/1:42 AM
Terrible. 10.
Re: A New Deal by oneglove	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249	23-Feb-07/1:43 AM
Down on Pennsylvania They’re all very gay But I’m here in Anacostia Cause my cock has gone astray.
Re: S.E.X. by Poetic Jugernot	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249	23-Feb-07/1:44 AM
Piss poor. Give up.
Re: The exile returns by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249	23-Feb-07/1:44 AM
Excellent work. Best poem ever written. Well done!