Nicholas Jones
on Happiness & Old Age by Caducus
11 Aug 2003, 3:19 AM
Gravy is beautiful. I make it out of a packet, but it ain't the same.
Sounds like a counting crows song, which isn't bad, but could use improvement when it is unaccompanied poetry.
Gravy is beautiful. I make it out of a packet, but it ain't the same.
No kidding.
What brand of cereal do you prefer? I was thinking granola to go with the parfait, but correct me if I'm wrong.
Burp.
a work of art.lessson for us all.
Caducus
on WHY IS THE MEDIA SO LONDON-CENTRIC? Written last Tuesday by Nicholas Jones
11 Aug 2003, 3:14 AM
Nicholas,
London is the Capital and they own the Sun, we peasants outside London must accept that we are inferior to all cockneys. London is also the only city in England, they pay higher taxes so deserve to have the best of everything.
Yo Joe-joe,
Listen I have to go to Greece... That's right I have booked a holiday. Can't relate to that huh. You've been alot of fun. I really enjoyed it. You're actually a pretty twelve year old girl ... but so sexy and so aware of your sexuality. You really should consider getting some large rubber cocks. When you grow up I'd be more than happy to fuck you up the ass. I can kind of relate to where you are. For the record I did not threaten you with sexual abuse. I am a old man who, in my younger days did enjoy fucking ass ... and did it quite well. But that's long gone from my system. I was just pointing out that you need to be very careful about how you approach people and the words that you use. I hope you're not stupid enough to talk face to face the way you do here on the net. I know that you're a beautiful young girl, but I do think you understand the concept of safe sex. I'm sure you're really just a beautiful sexy young being ... so you'll be okay. Like I said, I wish you the best of luck and hope that hardcore fist fucking finds its way to you. You can do amazing things with your anus if you're properly directed. Peace, Joy and eternal Happiness......Affectionally yours, King Abdullah II.
I think the dictionary preferred plural of buffalo is buffalo, but acknowledge your poetic right to say buffalos (even though buffaloes is the second place plural form) in order to point out the cowboys' ignorance.
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on WHY IS THE MEDIA SO LONDON-CENTRIC? Written last Tuesday by Nicholas Jones
11 Aug 2003, 7:58 AM
Like how you snuck in all the syllables that you couldn't fit in your haiku, into the lengthy title.
ugh. I love the idea, but it's more a curse/swear at this point. Can you expand it and add a little more poetry? But I do agree, Fuck Bush.
how is that a poem?
Not bad but show us this emptiness !
For example emptiness could be a bell not tolling, or a kiss before work after 20 years of marriage, give us what emptiness is to you. Also when you reach out what is there? is it emptiness? tell us about how the air feels so lost around your fingers anything other than nothing.
Lots of potential here but lethargic 5
scitz
on WHY IS THE MEDIA SO LONDON-CENTRIC? Written last Tuesday by Nicholas Jones
11 Aug 2003, 4:13 AM
It amazes me that whenever I see a Sci fi movie all the aliens choose to land in London, New York, Los Angeles. I mean what the fucks wrong with Mid Glamorgan? they could hide in the valleys undetected and then launch a surprise attack. As for that Ken Livingstone Mayor of London I have never seen a man fall so badly from the ugly tree and hit every branch on the way down.
Fuck London and its shit food, posh talking scabs from Peckham, and its drivers ahhh man those drivers.
I think s-1 l-3 is unnecessarily long. s-6, (soon),finally, maybe? s-9 opposite coasts? I'm a truck driver and verified by my atlas: Sagadahoc county,ME, Auburn, Lewiston area. To: Hudson, N.Y., I don't think you'd see much of CT. More like Mass. I am aware that this may be fiction(though it sounds like it may have happened, parts of it at least), This is one of my few areas of knowledge. That's my (big) ding on this. S-12 startle(d). S-13 drop the paranthetical, make 'em look it up. also, why only oral? I would think one would want to "access all areas", especially trying to go through such nonsense. Finally, S-13 (accelerating), breaking pace again, maybe.
On a positive note, I really enjoyed this, and I think poetandknowit has a challenger in the poetry/prose arena.
I used to have a Fiat but it broke down on me more times than my ex
Start-up to wheels-up, sans warm up. Gone.
i like it