Nice drive Shaft

Once again, a poem who's words are ones that can be shared and related to by others reading it, giving the poem meaning to the reader. Very, very good...

I don't really understand how the graphics coincide with the overall meaning of the poem, and I think that the language used in the poem takes away from the overal meaning of the poem, but overall good.

This is boring fucking chick fodder. If you are a man? Go eat some cherrys. If you are a woman? Go eat some cherrys. That is all, and chill them first. I see poemranker tonight has been BORING, except for Chivo's poem from systemofafrown, and some evil poem i guy a 7 to by Athena bofina, the rest of you poets suck and should give up, because you are making me so very emotional and stirring up my feelings of pian and sowrow and the world deserves piece I believe. And more Beif, that is all, you're all barely even targets for depressed rolling pigeons let alone a loose airplanes landing gear unit, but hey don't take my word for it, keep em coming, in case I run out of velcro or shoepolish.

What would you say if I told you I had transcribed this poeme onto a fine linen handkerchief, used it for an Embrowning, then placed it into a moist knapsack and stored it in a special drawer?

short, sweet, to the point. Great!

DENVER THE LAST DINOSAUR HE'S MY FRIEND AND A WHOLE LOT MORE

I like this because I totally understand it. And this part : Someone once said; 'To have loved and lost, is better than to have never loved at all', Well I say that this person has never known love. It is better to have never loved, Because the pain of love, true love lost, Is unbearable to anyone with a soul. :is very very true, at least to me.

I believe there is a cut in here somewhere... hmm...

I wish I could understand this...

I figured I'd tell you again that I really like this poem. I think the fact that it is busy gives it some power and sets a really good mood. To me, it seems like "This is your holiday in hell" sounds like it is ending. But that's just the way that I am thinking right now.

but ?UNFORTUNATLEY? I can't remember who in the hell you are anyway. it sounds as though its more fortunate than not. Otherwise I love this poem. VERY real. Great work.

My one comment would be... Well, it's just too ballerina. I went out and even purchased a bunny to pet, and watch me dance a pink tutu. I guess I was expecting the real Shavo, and not his little sister, excuse me while a jete.

Oh, and peace out home skillet, word.

The end does a whistling Pete, but 'if' it's yours, it's not terribly bad. 7.

You should laugh.

Would you?

Do you know the difference between then, and than? When you do, use it.

You're as predictable as the morning paper.

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