stomach

chilling.

this is really odd and catchy and i think it's funny =P

high school?

There are some "nice-sounding" parts in it, but what's with the picture? And what's with the attitude that everyone else except you is ruining poetry? (Just a question.)

vulgar and dumb.

great concept, but redundant. you essentially say the same thing twice.

This is average thats all how it got top fuck knows. 5

nice. very nice.

yoohoo rocks. gotta love chocolate water.

syllables?

I'd rather chase it, violence is overated like breast and tv. Whether metaphorical or not, but still better than the rest of the shit out her tonight.

Tears are overated like cock and vulva and boobs and sports. Heroin and voodoo and hunting wild animals at strip clubs and murder and murder and murder and disco. And pregnant twenty year olds with popcorn. all in.

Yes I am.

Disembowling is gross but it's funny. ^_^

This just reminds me of how screwed up everything is. DAV -- Disabled American Vets -- for some veterans this thrift store, and others like is, is the only way they can get money to buy clothes and food. They gave their lives and lost their limbs for the country, and the country gave them nothing. They can barely afford to eat everyday, and guys in jersies playing elementary school recess games get a million dollars a year? Hmm...

maybe instead of "popers" you should say "popery" - look it up. oh- and as for this being a haiku, it isn't. as far as it being a good poem, it's not that, either.

cute

I like it.

mekka lekka hi mekka heiny ho.