-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on some deleted poem
3 Jun 2003, 9:01 AM
BABLOLFISH
I have strong evidence that this is plagiarised from a suggestion by Vampiros Lesbos (who, despite his/her use of the superfluous 'e' at the end of 'poem', isn't me).
http://www.poemranker.com/suggestion-bro
There are so many great bits in this, I can't pick my favourite. horus8 = -=Dark_Angel=- = darkshark for example.
I can vaguely understand her believing horus8 = -=Dark_Angel=-, for, though we have clearly different writing styles, we have both been very mean to Journey and her precious daughter, and it's inconceivable that two different people could do that.
But darkshark? Who the hell is darkshark? darkshark has submitted three poemes and made no comments. Her evidence consists in:
a) "darkshark" contains the word "dark"
b) horus8 and -=Dark_Angel=- have each made one comment on one of darkshark's poemes
Well, I'm convinced.
Reading this was a waste of my time. Ms Kim Journey should stay in the trailer park where she belongs and listen to Garth Brooks. Please, Kim, leave the "hip-hop" to the black kids from New York.
Good Luck Kim and Tek, I wish you well, sorry you decided to call it quits, but thats how things turn out I guess, hoping you'll change your minds but not expecting it...
-Jason-
Amusing 10.
This should help your 7.61 vote my dear muse.
:) interesting
Keys that jingle in your pocket
Words that jangle in your head
Why did summer go so quickly?
Was it something that I said?
Lovers walk along a shore
And leave their footprints in the sand
Was the sound of distant drumming
Just the fingers of your hand?
Pictures hanging in a hallway
Or the fragment of a song
Half-remembered names and faces
But to whom do they belong?
When you knew that it was over
Were you suddenly aware
That the autumn leaves were turning
To the color of her hair?
Reading this was a waste of my time. Ms Kim Journey should stay in the trailer park where she belongs and listen to Garth Brooks. Please, Kim, leave the "hip-hop" to the black kids from New York.
Islander
on To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
3 Jun 2003, 9:25 AM
No-one gives a shit or u don't? :)
This is really cool and next time a techno whore comes home, i think i'll test his extra competence
"You are also Kaolin fire"
This goes all the way to the top! I think you are discovering the secret of the universe itself!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
3 Jun 2003, 5:34 AM
we'll miss you. at lestg, everyone who cares about decent potery will. you shouldn't let jealous ppl who just wish they could write anything worrth reading put you off showing everyone what you can do.
dont leave just cause some asses are telling you off, some people would like to read your poems and also like to have your responce to theirs.
Do you remember the Rollercoaster discussion from the movie "parenthood"? I can't make you stay, nor would I try. I would however, recommend you strap in and just enjoy the ride. The good stuff here at P/R is not what you see up front. You have to travel the catacoombs and back halls and secret rooms. There is a veritable plethora of wealth hidden deep within. YOU have to search for it. Which is An importand part of poetry. Discovery.
So tell me, Senator, where does one go when the off, and strange have been so well wrappered by you and the nappied one? WAIT! I know! No ones done the Rockettes!
YES! I'm off to Radio City Music Hall!!!!
Intransit grabs coat, flails the door open, rushes into the street kneecapping himself on the firehydrant, falls back first into the middle of the street only to have a purple smurf ascend from the manhole (thats a funny word) and yell "Whats all the ruckus?! Me and the Mrs. was gettin' it on when you completely stifled my stiffie, man!"
Smurf pokes intransit in the eye with a rolodex.
I LIKE IT
I like it
This I love
wow. great work. 10.