Could barely finish it

I fear you have again confused -=Dark_Angel=- with beakism. I thought we had got over that misunderstanding. Perhaps you have trouble with the concept because you have so many usernames.

Good grief! If this so-called "inner flame" had anything to do with the enormously long chain of wrong thoughts you must have been thinking in order to produce a poeme as stultifyingly cack as this one, then it should immediately be snuffed out with a giant turnip. rice / 10

Aren't you a little short for a stormtrooper?

For spamming I give you a zero. And I didn't read your poem either.

But do you have doves nesting in your bat cave?

Spell check while your loitering there could you, because this poem is riddled with err.

I would suggest not smoking pot out of cans for a while mate.

Change all 'i's' to pinochio's dress shirt.

Read Soderstrom's new poem (Theology)----it's great!

Read Soderstrom's new poem (Theology)----it's great!

Stop telling everyone, everywhere, to read this. It's atrociously bad.

You've succeeded in avoiding every theological philosophy straight down the board. Good Job! What exactly were you attempting to clarify with this piece doug? Proof you're asleep while you're awake?

O Wheeled-Spazz Chair on heap botty sit no legs and with twatty slogan cry "where be ramp in modern society" with bum trolley spin down lane people stare they don't understand face covered in dribble want to be astronaut but pants fall down because too spasticated to know what's going on.

The language is in need of some maturing, but the ending is good. Still needs work, but moving along.

Read Soderstrom's new poem (Theology)----it's great!

stupidest ode ive read in a while, funny thouhg

lol

You moron.