Robert K Foster
on Little Green Man by BleedingRose
23 May 2003, 11:05 AM
how silly.
Robert K Foster
on a haiku for all you traditionalists, and after you're done reading it you can eat my shorts by bondjedi
23 May 2003, 11:26 AM
made me laugh. 8
haiku?
having sex under the bleachers is NOT making love. it is fucking. get it straight. nothing wrong with fucking.
Speaking of pansies popping up everywhere...
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Her napkin:
Covered in kisses and ketchup.
Lies between us on the table.
A wrinkled mess of red stained white:
The slow moment passed.
On this fast food day.
Tick
Tock
Tick
I glance at my wrist then up at her.
Catching her looking like an old woman.
rape?
vile.
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somewhat clever, but what is with the title?
lose the punctuation, it disrupts the flow.
strangely sexual.
No haiku since it contains 18 syllables rather than the required 17.
Read Soderstrom's new poem------ it's great!
its the acid they put in it, eating away at your skin like chemlawn does to dandelions.
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A block or wedge placed under something else, such as a wheel, to keep it from moving.
Nautical. A heavy fitting of metal or wood with two jaws curving inward, through which a rope or cable may be run.
tr.v. chocked, chock·ing, chocks
To fit with or secure by a chock: The plane's wheels were chocked and chained down.
Nautical. To place (a boat) on chocks.
adv.
As close as possible: had to stand chock up against the railing.
I am confused. very confused.
Read Soderstrom's new poem-----It's great!
cute.
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