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why why why why why why why why why why why? You are worth more than that, if this is meant for someone I dont understand why. There is someone out there for you and only you.

The Gregorian calendar only succeeded in killing is quicker, that's for sure.

Chipper, yes, hanging around, no doubt for round two.

Super! Could you make it third person next edit? Because,I believe it would strengthen your, for shit, grammar, and make the reader even more fucking tired.

Congradulations! You have perfect antiwriting accidentally trying to go 'deep' no doubt. I never thought I'd live to suggest horrible circumstance intervention as a cure, but, go get raped or abandoned as soon as possible and we'll have a controled experiment to see if that indeed is what your writing is missing.

I guess. Yes, YES! that's it! (not you, I'm picking out new drapes for the den with my interior decorator 'flam-ee' [he's great with upholstery] sorry) Where were we? Ah yes, voting. "I should’ve known you would to the obvious" Lovely grasp of language here, really, you're amazing.

You give new meaning to plecostami world wide. You are the Queen of suck.

You are the relentless suck looming around all corners. Truly, you suck without abandon. You courageously suck. You put the word brave behind suck.

You should let me run with this. I'd fucking prime it to a high luster edit. An Olympian edit, if you will.

you're an animal...WHEW!! personally i prefer chains, to but each there own

Sorry, but this is just bad. Insipid and cliche. And it should be "you're precious", not "your precious", unless you're Gollum. Where is it being published? Christian Women's Daily Affirmations Newsletter? Also, if you're talking about God, you should capitalize Lord. (I learned SOMEthing in Sunday school) The Lord above knows that I try not to be mean to the innocent, but this is the wrong "sight" for this kind of simple righteous Christian Inspirational greeting card stuff. Unless you like to throw bloody meat to the wolves.

Very cerebral. But also vague and unclear to me. For example: "a passing between the deeds undone and the tasks left at hand" Aren't the deeds undone also the deeds left to do, or in other words the tasks left at hand? They seem to be the exact same thing.

"This all is really ridiculous" A truer word has ne'er been spoken. You don't need me to comment on your poetic ability when you are capable of providing such an accurate analysis yourself.

Is this the part where you explode. I hope so. Because I'm running out of fucking popcorn.

"You have just come on". What? What does that mean? PMT?Pre menstraul tourniquitte.

CUTE

Good Lord you fucking suck.

Romain Empiresky.

to my age having grown up not seeing me her whole life, and being told by our mother that i was already born when she met my father <mother denied my gestation and birth> so my sister thought that we weren't siblings so when we first met in salt creek california when i was 21 and she was seventeen. she fell in love with me, and would make passes at me daily...because she truly didn't believe that i was her brother (which we were half brother and sister), in fact all of my siblings are half blood with me cuz i am my parents only child, and they each remarried four times (i have four brothers and two sisters) still thats not a very positive thing to tell a child, at any age (that you are not related when you are) i knew but she wouldn't believe me no matter how hard i tried to convince her that what she was feeling was wrong.. cuz my mom had told her that she was her first kid and i was her step son her whole life (she grew up in hawaii), and since we never really met until we were older it caused some serious shit to hit the fan, cuz i let her seduce me one night to spite my mother and reverse her lie with a little black magic...i knew my sister would eventually tell her, exposing my mothers mental wickedness and illness...served her right...except it blew my family even more beyond its already ruined levels...of madness and selfish denial coated greed..<i was just so fucking pissed that i lost control> i suffered many years with the guilt, and still do...the third part (still on a bad acid trip) is about my heroin addiction that spawned from all of this guilt and insanity "before bed" implying my years of fighting addiction and how it affected my relationship with my highschool sweetheart who i was with for five years..i told her everything and we tried to help me, but i just hated myself to much for even her love to save me..and the last part "sixteen lost" (still tripping, refer to the mention of ergot infirst part) is about when i lost my mind and my earliest writings and everything i owned, and all of my friends and family and my well being and much much more...i couldn't remember any of the poems by heart only pieces, so i collaged it all together with different titles i remembered and some lines that couldn't be forgotten..basically the marquise de sade's last supper. i did it with a basic rhyme scheme at the beginning of it....to show the immaturity and childish frustrations that were controling my decision making abilities....hatred and revenge can warp a sensitive beings better judgment and linger forever tainting...no matter...i made a mistake...i forgave myself though, and all of them too...for the sake of my future mental health...i hope that will clarify a few things for you z... sorry for being so cryptic...good afternoon, luv horus's litigator.