powdered zombie.

good enough (8)

hopefully you will find your bliss...its a pretty good peom..-6-

I like the format, i like it...someone should throw a cookie at you from down the hall and scream profanities...sounds familiar doesnt it? ;) -8-

that's more gay than you

Beautifully observed and usual a pristine work from you Mr Pig. Full marks to you.

"quatet" it could only be better if it was a twatet. Could you incorporate say... waterskiing sumo wrestlers playing ping pong in between jumps, because that would be even more damn organic.

Ending 1897 in the Southern Bumisphere (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=- It came and went away, but I'll always remember that time I broke wind musical gays plunder the bum inspired by its brownful tunes. In the violent aftermath of forgotten dreams, now lost in the dark stench of human frailty and massively fermented scotch egglingtons, once again I find solitude as peasants flee vomitting, smothering their gnarled faces with napkins folded in upon themselves. There's a promise gave, which is given to the quiet self, to replace my underpants as soon as possible.

HaHaHa you must have grown up in my home town...clever poem if I may say so

I really like the poem...seems to me"workers hand"hmm...is this an extra-marital affair with a co-worker?

I bet you had trouble watching Kermit the Frog....anyway...good poem

This is great ...I love it

NIce job. This would work as a song with the second stanza being the chorus. (9)

yooo hoooo lil cindy lu.....gave you a nine your poem is fine

Pretty good, not great - 7

Were you attempting a villanelle?

inbound invalid. Voice boxes himself silly. While double parked.

I had to do a poem like that for school, that started with I am, i wonder, i hear, i see, i want, i am, I pretend, I feel, I touch, I worry, I cry, I am, I understand, I say, I dream. Is it just me, or is this some type of template for a type of poetry?

Psyclical.

why have you won the poemwanker award?