I know how u feel, not much here but gets the point across good job

wow thts really emotional cant even describe i am truly impressed

good poem pay no attention to the quetios they must not know tht poems mean somthin different to different ppl and arent meant to be explained

wow tht really is good i guess i have to listen when u give me advise now great poem again now i see wut u mean by sayin u know how i felt

not to be nosey but did it work any way it was good reminds me of the person i wrote most of mine about Hey since u write songs maybe u could help me come up with a chorus for Let Me Breathe nice song

I didn't know the Tughampton boy had a dog. I'd a brought it a bottle of Chivas. Which thing? The hound or the boy? Does the wheeled chair need oiled?

death behind a furry furrowed brow. ouch.

thts good u seriously have too much power behind tht truck

creepy. well done.

nice.

You know, Darlin', I never paid much attention to disrhythmic poems until your generation came along. And you are head and shoulders above the crowd. Next, please!

Good good good (plus 248 more goods) Oops - that makes it 252!

Reminds me of an evening with a man you care about...i love the way you describe the little details that people do when they are nervous..maybe a little shy "pulling threads at my sleeve" i really liked this one -9-

Please write more about the decrepit farmer and his jaded harvest. What sort of hat was he wearing? Was his face rotting away underneath it? Feel. Explore.

very good, i like it, but of course the storm is only a metaphor. at least i hope thats how uve done it. its just my interpretation

udder.

an i'm sure king midas is good at making trophies.

nice.

intriguing.

Dude tht is so wrong but funny