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Poetsettle on Anouk by daniella 14 May 2003, 6:43 AM
Just lovely.
baughworm on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL 13 May 2003, 5:42 PM
Just like the squirrel in the broke-ass car man. That was great.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on form: haiku cinquain by Poetsettle 14 May 2003, 6:49 AM
Well, isn't this pleasant. Taming your hair again I see.
horus8 on some deleted poem 13 May 2003, 12:42 PM
I thought well of this.
horus8 on some deleted poem 13 May 2003, 12:49 PM
Herpes is highly contagious, so is mr. Zimmerman. This poem was very satisfactory. 9.
horus8 on some deleted poem 13 May 2003, 12:52 PM
Trippy.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Sanctuary by Lolly 13 May 2003, 3:19 PM
Wanktuary (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=- The whore pisses I watch from the peepholes neither friend nor my mum is welcome here I am hunkered down wanking watching deep within the crotchtower protected hidden well beneath the gray folding sheets silent listening for the rush of footsteps undetected safe wanktuary within walls no one will find out...
baughworm on some deleted poem 13 May 2003, 6:06 PM
Although I like the structure and language of the poem, its seems a little Hallmark to me. "You helped me see the Light" has to go. I like the first stanza a lot though. Work in that realm more
some deleted user on some deleted poem 13 May 2003, 8:36 PM
A Haiku is supposed to be 17 syllables (5 7 5). This is 15 syllables (4 6 5).
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Search Engine by OneFingerAnswer 14 May 2003, 12:55 AM
unfinished, but great. Suprise, bet you thought i'd never say that?.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 14 May 2003, 1:17 AM
Don't listen to that cad known as Jeremi B. Handrinos / <{Baba^Yaga}> / Bachus / horus8. I think your song is great!
<{Baba^Yaga}> on To dust by casey 14 May 2003, 1:25 AM
Yes. God is the Devil. oops, can you dig that?
<{Baba^Yaga}> on some deleted poem 14 May 2003, 5:18 AM
Better then settle on moby's dick that's for sure.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on some deleted poem 14 May 2003, 5:31 AM
What about trevor needles oiled and muzzled for the weekend. A buggering from the sweet lord. Boys are for Lords not monster trucks. Needles are for hepatitis love therapy and immune system tests, any how. Now rigs, are for the real travoltas.
Poetsettle on pee haiku by New Life Drug 14 May 2003, 5:37 AM
Seems the form of traditional Haiku, yet the first line denotes no season.
Caducus on some deleted poem 14 May 2003, 5:37 AM
Looking back I think if I would have just said wanker, that would have done it. (now then will you copy and paste this now)
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Continuation by baughworm 14 May 2003, 5:43 AM
Jesus, you are on junky patrol. Well i'm with you. Line those weak chisel chins up for inspection. Let's cop a feel.
Poetsettle on some deleted poem 14 May 2003, 5:49 AM
This is moving, a traditional sabi Haiku; no need for caps to begin second and third lines. Wonderful writing!
Poetsettle on some deleted poem 14 May 2003, 5:51 AM
Haiku, nontraditional,nor is it in form of expression for wabi, sabi, karumi or aware. Nice try, though.
horus8 on some deleted poem 13 May 2003, 9:57 AM
Also; What does an empty soul look like? What is it filled with when it's not empty? A) A soiled gym sock. b) A gym sock full of soil. c) A gym sock buried in the soil. d) A pile of gym socks on top of a spoonful of soil. e) A half empty glass of ovaltine on top of a speeding station wagon at the bottom of a mountain. f) Dustin Hoffman naked doing an impersonation of a gym sock strung out on soil. G) none of thee above. H) all of thee below.