Miggy
on some deleted poem
26 Apr 2003, 7:35 PM
nice one, this really sounds like a real garage band or maybe more, keep writing cause u might have something
Not if the artist has the address of the purchasers home. Then he could break in with his palette and paint mustaches everywhere.
I would go grab a couple of my Good Robert Frost collections of poetry and fire some off at you, but I've already been vomiting all night. Besides, I haven't the slightest clue as to what or who in the fuck you are talking about in the slightest. Good day, SIR!
Well, first off, try not to write it down.
Secondly, go to Cancun with the rest of your type and do a swan dive from the motel 6's roof into the banquet table's fruit salad. What do you do if a cantalope wedge gets stuck in your vagina? Start a new religion.
I dont understaand why people are writing wierd things about completion dates and stuff. WHY????? but i feel i must congradulate u on finally getting a wanking award - WHAT TOOK THEM SO FUCKING LONG?
You are Lord Ganus as well. That is the only hexplanation for ur continuing advertisment of him. GOOD POEM THO!
I've read alot of your work, but I think this is quite ingenious. Hats off, my friend!
I love it! i think ill jot this one down in my little book. Though i cant give it a perfect score because of the whole haiku problem which others have already pointed out . but id love to see a revised edition!
Whatever Corky.
Tidy.
You forgot a period, and spelled revenge wrong. Unless you are a pirate then it's Arghgggg REvanGE is mine me harty!
i like the first two lines and the last
sort of ironic
wow. it souds like you're just doing this for the hell of a rhyme. a very bad rhyme.
whining trent reznor with his tongue cut out
you've got potential. keep going
how dare anyone even think of giving this piece of crap an eight
get over your bitching and your moaning...try coming up with a more creative way to express it.
The title's dumb, the rest is chipper.
How? You couldn't stand up before. Unless you count ramps.