maybe not a poem. but still on cue.

you will of course wait a bit whilst I take out an insurance policy, I gather?

"dislikes: rudeness, prejudice, inefficiency, ignorance, lateness, lies, war, pettiness, meanness and aubergines." I guess that pretty much leaves me out of the loop huh. Odd that you would mention the bazaar though.

POMEGRANITE

this should be on the top 15 list, not the bottom 15. at the same time it is truly awful. i give you a 5

This one got my pants in a flymo, very cutting (literally)

A exfoliation of lust, like sugarcane.8

would like to hear it spoken

You should smack into the lamppost. And again make this iambic.( Iknow what a red herring it can be as I'm chasing it myself). :) Study Dark angels stuff, get a feel and work it. This is soo cool.....

Whom ever sings this song must be taking it slow or have some really good diction to thier voice. For a song about being hungover I found it to be a little wordy to tell the truth. I really suggest going over it again and maybe doing a 2nd draft. -7-

http://chickswithdicks.com you might have to adjust your proxy settings to accomodate though. good luck.

Could you possibly rhyme askew with Jesu? and bible with liabel. Thankyou. Genesis 17 v27 "And all the men of his house. born in the house or brought with money from a foreigner, were circumcised with him." Now that's a riddle my friend only your penis can solve.

There's plenty of material here to take it to a sonnet. although that might contradict what others think of it now. I wish the better poets would give you help. You are deserving.8

Thank Jesu for the almighty rant! To keep us all grouded.

fucking fruit

and here I thought you were a stringless tampon trying to be a buffet.

hotdogs and hamburgers Choice finger foods for Islam. Meat off of the floor.

i like your your suspended with twine line

A fine vintage, and nice to see eveyone reading the ingredients before they buy it, I did buy it -9 (p.s thanks for the advice on the desecrated chapel, fine pointers)

Magical 8