Ranger
on Axe Murderer by Blindproject217
18 Apr 2003, 1:15 AM
Nice effort at a haiku at the end.
beautiful. 9.
Must agree with Fear of Garbage here, but other than that it's great!
I'll thank you to call them "combat-suitable trousers".
Muscles singing? Preposterous! Do this again please.
Aha!!! Originality at it's most beautiful!
Just strange.
What's up? Your voice activated pen out of ink?
lol. bobbers.
Fabulous, absolutely wonderful! "That pointed non fruit for lunch".
Only problem is 'apologise' (only 1 p)
Have a good day.
8
I agree! Truly a beautiful poem!
OOOOH yay a poem by you that i like! well done! -8- (i am stingey - but its a very high 8!)
And YOU ARE jesus! he is!
Are the others the ones doing her at night now? Bastards.
Indeed. Has anyone ever had to listen to hours of contemporary French music before? It's hell.
8 I think.
Beautiful as far as it goes but I feel it needs more. I also don't know who Jordan actually is, although it might have been intended that way, I think that you need to explain him/her a little more clearly.
Very nice anyway. 8
Fantastic!
pretty good
Ah! This is one of your best poems GW and I will give it a ten.