thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Where's heaven? by cleverdevice
12 Apr 2003, 12:34 PM
Well said.
in-ter-est-ing.
plagiarist
I'm not a big fan of parents but this almost brings tears to my eyes. Very well written. It feels heart felt. Worthy of many more, a -10-!!!
If the Judge doesn't give 20 years
I'll bust out my garden shears
And stick'em up your rear
:)
-7-
Too much D&D for some body.
Beautiful, poetry is literally, art.
War leads to hell but whose hell are we headed to?
Chalk another one up for the maestro......!
thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Okay, so it doesn't actually work, it's still shit-funny... by Yardbird
12 Apr 2003, 12:28 PM
I'm in stiches Cause of those bitches!! -8-
Mght I ask of your time on my "mum". Seems I scared people with it, it is untouched.
Thank you,
Your friend, Rich
Oh and 8 . The start has great metaphors, then changes a little to telling later. thats all.
I'm beliver in voting because as a writer improves, he/she can watch the avg. of the poems climb, which gives a basis for improvement. in my opinion.
yeah that did piss me off i dont see whats wrong with this site, cept the swear words, bobjim, gay porn, lesbian porn, raping poems....
i liked it.
Shame shame you have my permission to beat them with an old photo frame(no new ones cause why was something new) to the point of unconsiousness but no further! Its over when the lights go out! You Hear me! There are limits to how far you can go even when some one is that big an ANUS.
Bravo, sir!!
Wonderful, cower before the might that is the bastard, sperm-cryogenically-frozen (or time machine concieved, who knows?) offspring of Charlie Parker.
Oh please, our puppy is due to be 'snipped' in a few weeks! Very evocative though. 10
Bit strange! Doesnt completly make sense (to me anyway)
Ooooh thats good. Not a ten because i will give nothing a ten after reading that poem by DA about the sausage roll - brilliant! i will instead give a -9- x