So many poets, it's easy to overlook something this good.

deathly accurate, I presume.

Sincerety, is a nose wipe on a cold sleeve at the bus stop in third grade.

Very Humourous, you are a witty man and a 10 would be the mark of a proper gentleman.

"The loneliness That’s my only companion And yet You say You want them back" also, or too would be the last word probably 'too'. then you could say... But that's something you can never have back, or unreturnable. and that would be putting your foot down nicely to conclude the piece.

I repudiate that this is gross as someone said. I think this has unparalelled beauty, growing old (God Willing) is inevitable and filling his wrinkles with the purity of the big blue and power of the ocean makes me feel you have embraced this inevitability and made something perceived as repugnant very beautiful. I salute you, I am only in my thirties but felt humbled by this. May God keep us all. 10 Exquisite

Quite poignant, I liked the last Stza. (Does not deserve a 4)

Seems to me that you're in Korea often, Rex.

Sample of line 21: I am no longer chained to you at my wristwatch. Take it one line at a time. Reword them without telling words such as: love, hate, pain,lies. Try not to repeat yourself: lines three and seven say the same thing. Keep trying.

Oh Jesus No ! tell me this is not true for Z is infinitely the damsel of femininity. I feel ill, I must fetch myself a brandy at once.

", ..................I LOVE YOU !" you can lose this, because the reader already knows, and if they don't by the end they don't deserve to.

Golly ! this was enjoyable and humourous because contracts are the epitomy of evil. In Eritrea one man had his hand severed for breach of a promise made to his son, his son severed his fathers hand with such ferocity it split the scabbard. Bravo 8

Oh there were so many Louis Of Francais, what was his penchant for ?

A typical topical right down the receptacle, "now out the window".

Dear Mr In-transit. A formal request for you to please offer any thoughts on my recent posting. Kind Regards Laurence. aka Mr Pig

Its one of those to study I think. I will try and come back one day soon but for now I must retire for my bath.

I will quit smoking and prepare.

Z is so much better at this type of product, especially this length. I'll print, think and return with some tools for you perhaps. I'm yet a guppy myself.

I enjoyed the opening but detest Marx, he used to scare me as a boy.

"awaken until September" reach September. or, survive the journey.