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on some deleted poem
8 Apr 2003, 8:21 AM
ew. sheep dip pie. ew.
You just never stop writing, do you? Do you think that constant, unchecked writing is a sign of a) immense creativity b) a wild, untamed spirit c) being full to bursting with fresh, challenging ideas?
(I love it when he starts a b cing don't you?)
I haven't had a new idea in about 8 months. And the ones from 8 months ago were really just recycled from a year before that. And they were mostly stolen from TV.
Knowing they were RIGHT, for god and country?
And large-breasted american women? And piss beer?
Have a 9 for creative knotting.
and never write another cliche?
sorry, that was harsh. i do like this piece, but it stands on the other side of over-used metaphor right now. you need to channel this, and make it more personal. reinvent the wheel. make the black bird green.
naughty boy. you've dreamt of it for months now. i hope it wasn't too warm.
shit, settle. why didn't you tell me i had a sex change?
hahahaha.
nice. hoop. la.
CHURN BABY CHURN
IT'S A HAM EXTRAVAGANZA
WAYS TO SPICE UP YOUR LIFE
#3 OF 100
Play the theme music from 'The Pink Panther' while searching for your keys or wallet. It will make the hunt tremendously exciting, and you will not mind if you miss your train or have to go to work nude.
Oh utter delight ! I adored the use of language desribing the glove and the ump, thumbs up to you I say, bloody good show.
I hear the words on the streets to descibe this is LOL ?
Well I'm astonished I never understood the lingo, a hearty hoo haa indeed.
Ummmm... Fun images but abstraction loses it's power when you can't follow the chord to a point.
By the way, it's = it is. It's = the one belonging to it. (last stanza)
Can you point me towards some of your more meaningful poems? I rather enjoy those.
Hey Mr. Bub, I was wondering if you could help me with a poem Im having trouble with? I have the beginning and the middle but the end is really crappy, and I dont know how to end it right. Would you be willing to help me?
This is the kind of thing that proves the point to my villanelle. Could be a new fave. The closing STOMPS!
What, did your bodyfriend wipe his dick on your face one time too many?
This is a quality piece of writing. I'm sure you'll etc etc.
meh.