No wonder Caducus writes weak poems. Look at the stuff he likes. Hey, birdman: I miss you, too.

Usually I love your stuff. Unfortunately understanding is part of that for me. That being said I cannot love this one. I just don't get it.

what a great poem. I enjoyed it, thanks for writing it.

I like this idea, but you do not convince me.

By the way everaiden, nice job on the poem.

Killer cool

v. What happens next? Excellent start; could use more detail. What details you have are presentes beautifully, so I hunger for more.

An excellent poem... it stuns my brain and all I can think of to really say how I feel about this one is WOW.

I'm so pig-headed, I don't understand the end. I particulary like the 5th stanza and the way you single her out from the rest of the women. Vilanelles are so restrictive, I doubt I could ever write even a bad one.

Therapy would do you good. This is uninteresting, even at the end. Especially at the end.

I've been there, good job on showing your feelings, but i agree it could use more imagery. Try to make the reader feel the pain, dont just describe it.

It just don't work as a poem, as a lyric with a chorus maybe.

I have always been founder of the brave puncturer not the teasing mutilator.

one more hint, please

Great poem, lousy title.

Are you still a sap? I'm still a sap.

fig leaf pornography? what! why are they callled devil docs anyway? somehow i missed that.

"remind" try pluralizing this. "I'll have left of my summer of love." I have left of my summer in love.

Indeed. He did not take all of it, I see. But it sounds as though you did. <sigh> Have a seven; it seems you might be used to something around that size.

It seems as though you need to get religion.