Blindproject217
on Tearing Me Apart (again) by intheailse
21 Mar 2003, 11:16 AM
Very nice
like it....but undecided whether the title is suitable...
Oh Sweet Jesus !
This is an awesome poem, I feel the same alot of the time, I know I have skill and potential but its all just a pipe dream unless I do something about it.
read it here:
http://www.megaera.org/Megaera/summer01/
nicely done. the third stanza made me dance, as I made the mistake of attending a protest for shits and giggles yesterday. it was the most depressing spectacle I've seen in ages.
great poem, 10
Do you live in California?
read it here:
http://www.ravenfilm.com/poems_1.htm
www.ravenfilm.com/poems_1.htm
Apparently you think the aim of poetry is to take an idea on which you have only the vaguest of grasps, write down the first things that come to your mind when you think about the idea, and then try to confuse the reader with obtuse, meaningless sentences that at first glance look like ones that actually have meanings, so their grasp is made even worse than yours.
Well you're right! That is the aim of poetry.
Sir, snake charmers go doodle blee blee chirpe whislee we and then the snake takes their eye. Not vice versa. What goes around comes around quit fucking whining. we'll eventually get ours Perhaps you'd rather be nerve gassed (vx is some nasty shit, that'll invert your nipples) at a bus station, or perhaps visiting your brother at work when some zit faced idiot with a left handed fatwah flys a cesna full of anthrax and c4 up your ass on the fourtieth floor. You obviously don't have kids. America is not after their oil idiot just tweedle dumb and dumber. After all that's what we have Venezuala for stupid. WE HAVE THE POPPIES! WE HAVE THE OIL. WE HAVE THE HARAM CHICKS. NEENER NEENER NAW NAW. America's god? please, you can't fit del taco that easily into my tiny little mind mate. cheers, enjoy the shove turtle dove
Like a Vermouth, dry leaving a pleasurable after taste.
my anal poemes are better.
Touching. I suggest you go over it and fix your typos(by rereading it because spell check misses alot <like angle in the 2nd line>). As It stands -8-
this is certainly "special", but in the short bus-football-helmet-year-round-eating-pa
yep