horus8
on Digging by WankerPoem
16 Mar 2003, 3:01 PM
GQT Awarde.
hahahaha i dont gettit oh well 10 since i give all ur work 10 coz its good
yes he is, horus. dee-lite.
bit random stamp deary - its all a bit hopeless nowadays huh?
God's test? lol. better bring a number two pencil. People think the strangest things i swears. God's test? ah... i take it that it's... multiple choice with an essay at the end for enlightenment? does he or she offer re-testing for those of us hungover or cripples that missed the bus? what about children under the age of ten that die naturally do they get a chance to understand your's and god's testing methods? What a crock of shit.
excellent ending line in 1. much more satisfying.
2 works better without the punctuation. good call.
3 has amused me.
dude, lay off the beatles. it's not working for you. mr. toad thanks you for the attentions, but wished you could have come up with something a little more original for him. forum. fore arm.e
are u male or female? ornella sez ur female! good poem nice structure
i dont know what to say! well written?!
You are forgiven. Now move the fuck on with your life. There is too much going on for you to be steeping in nonexistant piss. It's 'ether' (an invisible realm). it's all in your head. Be your own person, not someone else's. So mote it be.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2003, 3:02 PM
no :*
Could be stronger and taller.
GQT Awarde.
"The vail is lifted " veil.
Choice cuts.
poetandknowit
on Looks like war, but tastes like chicken by Jeremi B. Handrinos
16 Mar 2003, 7:22 PM
Pretty funny stuff. Inspired by the girlfriend's job no doubt.
kthulah, you are my new heroine.
mad skillz, good sir. they still crack my shit up on the re-read.
i am certain that little angel maria will shed tears of joy, as have i! when she sees this!!!