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hipster flare on some deleted poem 14 Mar 2003, 6:43 AM

Ok . wish granted. Hope you are happy.

elizabethann on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 8:57 PM

love it. one of the best i've read in a while.

<{Baba^Yaga}> on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 9:11 PM

It was born out of Porte and a vanerial wart, He claimed that it was a profile.

INTRANSIT on hard as a rock by <~> 14 Mar 2003, 6:10 AM

I do blieve you've got the villanelle down pat.

INTRANSIT on All Meta-Verse Shall be Deleted, it is Poison by middenHeap 14 Mar 2003, 6:46 AM

Is this a test?

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus 13 Mar 2003, 8:41 PM

I'M SURE THIS MEANS SOMETHING.

<{Baba^Yaga}> on The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus 13 Mar 2003, 8:42 PM

In terms of psychic warfare? that was Roman Polanski's Quaalude.

<{Baba^Yaga}> on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 11:10 PM

Did it ever cross your mind that perhaps she's just stupid? i mean really i have no sympathy for here here family or the prophet of the bums they should all be abducted as soon as possible. That girl is mentally three, maybe her nipples her vulva and her turd cutter came back a woman, but there's nada upstairs. No storm, no activity, Daddy's little girl. Besides anyone who has read the book of latter day saints can barely chuckle without saying out loud, "are you fucking serious?" Serves them all right, Who's ever heard of such a pathetic religion, so unimaginative and preposterous it's practically beyond normal. The only thing one can gather from the story is Mormon's need to stop breeding.

lastobelus on some deleted poem 14 Mar 2003, 4:07 AM

erm, feeling alienated hardly qualifies one as being unique in all respects on THIS website. I think the last line should be: "I'm choking on the fog of despair as it wells insidiously up from my inner being like a miasma of hopelessness" just a comment.

Tintagiles on A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz 14 Mar 2003, 5:54 AM

Pssst... despite the fact that their last letters are the same, 'Blood' and 'good' don't rhyme.

lastobelus on A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz 14 Mar 2003, 6:10 AM

are you sure you didn't mean "to move forward / we must MOVE our behind" ???

INTRANSIT on Dust by Caducus 14 Mar 2003, 6:13 AM

I waited and it was worth the wait.

hipster flare on The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus 14 Mar 2003, 6:48 AM

I liked it OK. the part about never getting "laid" sounds common.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap 13 Mar 2003, 8:42 PM

ACES ANOTHER LOVE POEM! WELL GOLLY FUCKING GOSH I HAVEN'T SEEN ONE OF THOSE IN A WHILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 8:43 PM

I AM THE ONE THAT KILLED YOUR DAD I AM THE EARLY MORNING KIT KAT SEVENTY FOUR SEVENTY FIVE

razorgrin on some deleted poem 14 Mar 2003, 6:38 AM

giggle. shin's ex (homeless for two years now) busks with a recorder. it's annoying. Nice girl, though.

hipster flare on some deleted poem 14 Mar 2003, 6:45 AM

very nice--reminded me of an e e cummings poem about the baloonman whistling far and wee...

elizabethann on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 8:56 PM

eh...not a bad poem but it's missing something. i can't put my finger on it but it's just not an 'amazing' piece of writing.

INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 14 Mar 2003, 6:16 AM

log me in for the obvious.

lastobelus on some deleted poem 14 Mar 2003, 6:27 AM

Oh man, that was great. It was even funnier the first time I read it because for some fucking reason I read lines 5/6 as "To breathe life into such a / splendid tuna" which was very evocative.