Eee! Can I join in? That is downright brilliant. (I assume that it's Bach's Toccata -- the one sometimes known as the Doomsday Toccata? Good good.)

NOBODY CARES.

HARD AS A SOCK

WOW LOL STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS YOU REALLY BARE YOUR HEART AND JUST LET YOUR EMOTIONS FALL OUT I MEAN SO MANY PEOPLE COULD LEARN FROM YOUR EXAMPLE THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL PIECE AND IT MAKES ME CRY WITH HAPPINESS ABOUT HOW THE WORLD IS SO GREAT AND YOU JUST SAY THINGS IN SUCH A BEAUTIFUL, SIMPLE WAY YOU DON'T BEAT AROUND THE BUSH OR TRY TO MAKE THINGS MORE THAN THEY ARE YOU JUST TELL IT LIKE IT IS BUT THAT'S OK BECAUSE EVERYTHING HAS A TRUE INNER BEAUTY THAT FAR OUTSHINES THE FALSE BEAUTY CREATED BY INSINCERE POETS AND THEIR WEAVING OF WORDS YOU HAVE CREATED A REVOULTION IN POETRY AND MY HEART IS FOREVER YOURS

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You have stolen my heart away with your pure, simple words. Who needs fancifications like "writing in a style that isn't identical to prose but with random line breaks" or "non-default choice of words" or "a basic understanding of poetry"?! Obviously not you! You are so special that you have an innate mastery of the essence of poetry without even needing to read any other poems! You're so amazing that the last three thousand years of poetry is rendered irrelevent by your challenging, breakthrough work! LOOK YOU STUPID BINT: YOU ARE A STUPID BINT.

REALLY? THAT'S GREAT NEWS! YEP. EXCELLENT! OK. OK. YEP. CHEERS. SEE YOU AT SEVEN THEN. OK. LOVE YOU. BYE!

Most excellent limerickizationalism.

doing his master's bidding, middenHeap's into the fray. oy vey! I suppose -that- no one really could --will help the meter When she over her cradle cooed --i know what you mean, but it reads awkwardly nice effort. excellent topic for a V. the grief-struck often do repeat and repeat, to force themselves to accept. very nice tie-in, there.

First I must deal with your talking about nothing else when I see you, then I must deal with it in your poetry... Bah. See if I ever make you a CD again. I give you points because it's funny, remove some points because I'm sick of the subject, add some because it's amusing to see your conversation put in poetry, and remove some because I've heard it all before. Love 'n' kisses. Really.

I remove one point. You know damn well why. (There. See? I'm getting better. I only took off one point. And I didn't kill anyone last Saturday. Be happy.)

I believe you've outdone yourself. Have a FWOT.

i'm giving it a nine, even if it's to him.

Yes! Friend o' the Devil is a friend of mine. If i gert home before daylight i just might get some sleep tonight hight... Got a wife in Chino... 9.

This poem is cool, it's exactly the same if you read it backwards as when you read it frontwards. How'd you do that?

Excellent snazziness.

You are a moron. FYI.

You are a moron. FYI.

You are really talented. I bet a lot of {members of the opposite gender} admire that and you are therefore very popular?

This is absolutely incredible. What is there to say but 'wow'?

wait, are the grateful dead the zombies or the hippies?