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horus8 on Sofia by daniella 7 Mar 2003, 12:15 AM

Really lovely. 10!

horus8 on Death From Above by Jimbo 6 Mar 2003, 8:54 PM

a bit long, but quality. I could edit a version of this for you.

Frass on First Confirmation by babyBOOMER 6 Mar 2003, 2:09 PM

This is strong, and very timely, given our current state of international affairs. I want to read more of your work, bB.

morffrom on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 1:58 PM

Ok it rocks - 9/10

<~> on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 1:57 PM

better. too many throw-away words for a haiku, though: ram horns crash, ____ ____ whet stones sharply grind ____ ____ Mars in retrograde. get on it son!!!

morffrom on some deleted poem 6 Mar 2003, 1:56 PM

blank

Shardik on Blackened Cauldron by Ellie95 6 Mar 2003, 1:42 PM

Cauldron. Within. Blackened.

nentwined on A Losing Streak by Jigg 6 Mar 2003, 1:11 PM

I hear that.

some deleted user on Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe 7 Mar 2003, 3:06 AM

lol

horus8 on just as we were by daniella 7 Mar 2003, 12:18 AM

"meagre" other then that little glitch which practically works well enough any way. Great poem!

horus8 on No Sense by daniella 7 Mar 2003, 12:12 AM

Afterword 1 (Free verse) by daniella He slides his step to the side, and a heart skips its beating. Like a bird lying lame on the wet winter hour of dawn. Like no approach he comes, like a tongue withdrawn. No sense, no truth, no arms to hold on. On a mission of mercy up over. The newest light is mounting up to correct the marks left for another. Try that.

horus8 on Anouk by daniella 7 Mar 2003, 12:08 AM

Charming.

horus8 on some deleted poem 6 Mar 2003, 8:40 PM

Jeremi? How much for a baby rodent, and a room? with no view. I will keep the books and the mit though.

<~> on Sofia by daniella 6 Mar 2003, 8:31 PM

wisdom, child. wisdom.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 6 Mar 2003, 7:30 PM

LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

INTRANSIT on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 4:36 PM

Tastes great-more filling!!

Jimbo on Sofia by daniella 6 Mar 2003, 6:22 PM

BEAUTIFUL! Sifting sands, tidal pools and falling stars mark the force you take to prove your ground

morffrom on The Blooding by Mr Pig 6 Mar 2003, 2:01 PM

Not a vegetarian then ?

maffy on Anatomy by Jimbo 7 Mar 2003, 3:10 AM

putrid

scitz on The Blooding by Mr Pig 7 Mar 2003, 3:15 AM

Read this again, and it improves every time