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Shardik on First Confirmation by babyBOOMER 6 Mar 2003, 12:22 PM
Gripping and punctually perfect.
TanHand on some deleted poem 6 Mar 2003, 5:42 AM
Why are you in such a bad mood anyway? Lunarly spurned?
TanHand on Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos 5 Mar 2003, 10:37 PM
This poem is like a fresh bayleaf immersed in hot hot butter.
<~> on some deleted poem 6 Mar 2003, 12:01 PM
couldn't the suicide bit be last, so at least we have some hope?
Ranger on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 12:29 PM
Only mistake here is 'wet' should be 'whet' I think. Otherwise very good indeed, but I would personally like a stronger image built. Still, a nice haiku. 8
<~> on One More Mile by marvelis 6 Mar 2003, 12:02 PM
stop rhyming NOW. go to vegas. loosen up.
<~> on A Losing Streak by Jigg 6 Mar 2003, 12:04 PM
what happens if you duct tape buttered toast, butter side up, of course, to a cat, and drop it off the top of a building? do you create an anti-gravity field? didn't someone try this once? the cat HAS to land on its feet. the toast HAS to land butter-side down. maybe -=Dark_Angel=- can step in, and offer a ray of light, here? or at least some sort of conditional statement?
<~> on Text Messages Sent by blueENDyellow 6 Mar 2003, 12:00 PM
how does this have anything to do with text messages?
TanHand on Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos 6 Mar 2003, 5:53 AM
Jesus christ, POW Tea blend is delicious. Prince of Wales that is. Goddamn.
OneFingerAnswer on The Drunkest ever by horus8 6 Mar 2003, 4:00 AM
I like it lots. I don't understand the last line's relevence but I'm sure you'd be happy to explain. By the way, is there an instant messanger program that you use? No need to put your sn up. Just tell me the program and I'll tell you mine. I'd like to ask you for some help with a piece that isn't even ready for this site yet. Mostly because it's more of an idea than a piece.
Mr Pig on some deleted poem 6 Mar 2003, 2:21 AM
Quite poignant, the ending hits like a freight train, some thoughtful lines in here, some muddled but to be fair, one liked it.
TanHand on Loud Taps by celiff 5 Mar 2003, 10:40 PM
This reminds me of this one time in the bathroom stall I was tapping the divider...TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP I know ur in there lol TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP holmes, homeslice TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP then he shot himself in the face like in Full Metal Jacker. Pie-Ull! KABLAM! Get it??
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Give Me A Chance by bxjay170 5 Mar 2003, 9:57 PM
This isn't a poem. It's the overflow of a hideously misconducted enema. Did your teacher tell you this was good? WELL IT'S A PILE OF SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT. Thanks, I'll be here all week.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Forbidden Fruit by celiff 5 Mar 2003, 9:55 PM
Is this supposed to be profound or something? OH WOW LOL I GET IT THE SERPENT IS EVIL AND HE IS SUGGESTING THAT NUDAM AND EVE TAKE A BITE OF THE FRUIT! What is the point? Are you actually saying anything? This is truly the worst thing ever.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Unholy War by marvelis 5 Mar 2003, 9:53 PM
Good effort! 3!* * 0 ** ** 1 *** *** 0
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Loud Taps by celiff 5 Mar 2003, 9:52 PM
Great! I love the way you take seemingly inert elements of nature and give them a vibrant personality! TOOT (Ten out of ten)!!!
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on need of love by bxjay170 5 Mar 2003, 9:49 PM
Excellent! With this poem you have really delved deep into the mysteries of the universe and come up much the richer! Also, I find your glib, willing need to define yourself by having an emotion toward another person sickening and naive! 10/10!!!
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Text Messages Sent by blueENDyellow 5 Mar 2003, 9:43 PM
Oh, real classy, deleting comments. IS THAT HOW YOU GO THROUGH LIFE? SIMPLY DELETING THE PEOPLE WHO GET IN YOUR WAY?
Mr Pig on Prometheus sang for vultures by horus8 6 Mar 2003, 1:58 AM
Oh quite lovely.
<~> on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 6 Mar 2003, 12:19 PM
ewe. y the comma?