Bachus
on Fresh faced Danger-Teen by INTRANSIT
4 Mar 2003, 9:20 PM
Provocative and quite amusing.
this i like....especially part 'getting harder to swallow'
Very powerful.
Have you ever read like, a real actual poem? Stealing shooting pushing wanting. Those words sound nice. Try using them. They're musical.
"Glittorus (For Zzinia) (Free verse) by TanHand AKA the toe nail painter
RE-edit of a miracle by a miracle [HORUS]
RAVEN!!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE
Vicious...I knew it
WOLFWINGS SHADOWFLIGHT AND I WERE JUST
>>Discussing amiga gfx lol
Earth girls, are needy
Their world, is breezy
As my skin, is peeling
It is this, I am feeling
They said we were too young
NO FUN
DO IT DO IT DO IT
RAVEN!!!
Vicious??!?! KAW!! KAWW KAWW!! FLAP FLAP FLAP
AMIGA GFX <><><><><><><><>
You're barking up the wrong tree (you witless clusterfuck)
I like it.. and I don't. I love the theme. I love the images. It just seemed too choppy to me. 6.
I thought that you said the pink ones had let you done, bitch?
'I dig you Asian dude.....snap on tools'. Is its own poem. Many great images. The mexican hawking roasted maize is important. I shall write one too.
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I'm lost. . . nevertheless it sounds pretty awesome, keep writing.
Jesus, I never knew you cared. Sorry.
No problem, but I have a beautifull cock, so I guess your argument is with God tit-teeth, and i'm sure there are a lot of other men who are willing to step forward here and proclaim that they too have pretty puds, stud monkey was it? yes i think it was. Also; i know woman that will come forward with the truth. That they also have eye friendly floggers, my friend soooooooo that said. YOU just got the short end of the stick, friend, buddy, pal, aquaintance, surrogate toothpaste unfolder, visor flipper, pool cleaner.
I'll tell him to choke on the deadsea scrolls. I'm a Mason not some self obsessing Catholic cry baby. I'll design him a new church and let him blow me 'tween the pews. We'll get drunk on the blood of hayzeus and eat his body, too. Bob? you are a lazy bad chef and a shame upon the vatican, i feel that much more delusional for having let you think you can't blink. poof*
oh how i can relate!! simple and i liked it.
this intrigues me
The top five lines are redundant. The rest a hell of a meal. Simple, and pleasantly sinister.
Very nice. Talent overflow! You rawk.
yes.
Look I don't pretend to be particularly well versed in anything, but you two really deserve eachother.
Still sucks.