Delightful my Dear girl, bloody well done.

arrrrrrrrrrghhh

This is an epic work of true beauty. 10/10!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111

holy shit, that says it all or comes damn close. also "do you fuck your doubles in the undisclosed location you sometimes shares with dick cheney?"

I recieved the magazine today. It looks delightful. Thank you so much for everything. You are a true friend Z. and a great writer. I will give you my feedback perhaps later on the phone. Cute pictures. Very interesting blood line. Cheers.

"four calm winds" this part does not fit in the hospital. Try changing it to "clean white sheets".

Perhaps you swing pipe. though small and just an elbow joint with a little sodder and brazing... who knows, free plumbing. Your spelling of field is really worth the read though, i would imagine, right?

Absolutly pitful i'm sorry no talent at all. Dark Angel is way better with his AIDS poem PS sorry to be so harsh please don't take offense :)

Whatever happened to Babitt(sp?)-I miss his work, it had a nice quality about it. Please re-post it, if not I would love to share West of here with some literary friends of mine.

Oh how delightful you have made a couple of amendments to the poem. I feel this may or may not help you. What you must try and engage here is the derelict open spaces and smells in the hospital, think of something fitting to connect that emptiness of the hospital corridors to the emptiness of ones emotions. If I ever walk in to a hospital the smell, and sounds always remind me of my late Aunt Violet. The last line is sweet young man but one thinks it would be beneficial for one to leave this poem a while and come back to it rabid with inspiration. I bid you good day young sire.

Needs a bit of work on the rythm just to make it flow a bit better. would sound pretty googd as a song-sort of range against the machine stylee typa thing!

By Jove what a surreal piece of lit. You do really need to be more precise with what you are trying to convey here. This could be a rich purse of sovereigns but you've not tied it. I do like the line 'when I awake I am bleeding' its quite affecting but one needs to improve the context and enlighten the reader more as to what the bloody point is. I will give you a 5 for effort but take your time when writing poems, lock on to the emotions that make sense or else no soul will know what your talking about. I wish you well. God Speed !

Lots of superlatives followed by something affectionate and a very high score And just as surely lots of exclamation marks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and some random 1111111 due to weakened pinky finger and and and and oh *YHJBmfdmn,diofdsnklvnm,. dsvl; asl? dycho? ifd! mto! aims!

Are you nobgoblin nentguff, cause your poems come up in the random thingy one hell of a lot. How does one apply to be a nobgoblin? Can one do it online? I've been practicing with the aid of yoga. blue fingers verse good Djimi Traore bad

I'm crucifying Jesus, banging in the nails, And I am so happy, because old Jesus flails. I'm crucifying Jesus, nail him to the cross, The poor old bastard bleeds to death and I don't give a toss. I'm bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, banging in the nails. I'm bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, banging in the nails. I'm bang, bang, bang, bang, banging in the nails. I'm bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, banging in the nails. I'm crucifying Jesus, in my piss he bathes. I think I am a prevert, I think I am depraved I'm crucifying Jesus, beat him to a pulp, I stick my organ in his mouth and on it he must gulp. I'm bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, banging in the nails. I'm bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, banging in the nails. I'm bang, bang, bang, bang, banging in the nails. I'm bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, banging in the nails.

There are only 2 things wrong with Mr Bush 1) Everything he says. 2) Everything he does. It would be spiffing to see the man doing a multiple choice exam, he would never get past Q1. I no longer will read the newspapers about the war, I choose to watch cartoons there really is no difference between Daffy Duck and George Bush /Tony Blair, except Daffy is more intelligent. In these times take arms my dear boy and pick up your pen and write till the quills bare, these weapons of ink are the only weapons of beauty. Take care my illustrious kindred. Mr L Pig (8) - Read this confrontationally to your bosses.

honestly, i don't know what this means, but it says it in a way that pleases my soul. (i should say, i have an idea, but...) 9 swastikas!

as usual, gorgeousness and gorgeosity made flesh.

well?

I would suggest another thing wrong with good Mr.Bush: everything he is. Get to the problem at its source.