Quality use of the word "ass-hat". 10 for it.

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i wish i had written this.

i wouldn't dream of it.

Meatloaf has man tits.

YOU PROMISED ME MALE WHORE POETRY YOU SNOW BOARDING YUTZ. 0.

Yeah, junior colleges have eltistist propaganda programs too. Ceramics for the handicapped. (little johnny was blind, he thought he was making a fruit bowl, but it ended up being a rainbow glazed port a potty.) Now he has a patent and government contracts. They will be available and target this year and swap meets in about a decade.

But could you call it. Michael Caine finger banged me at the matinee?

AUM Shinrikyo is interesting. Schopenhauer, however, was an utter yutz.

Diamonds are forever. cool.

Too narrative to be a proper poem, but delightful anyway.Yesterday I slipped down about 15-ish ice-covered stairs on my back only to finish like some masochistic gymnast on my knee.

Odd scanning. I see your cabin fever is still raging.

Yep. that's a fragment alright.

What buiding is this? I'd like to avoid Stan and his freindless colleague

Ooh. Naughty and yet nice. I like it. I'm not sure I agree with "prose" though. I often think of prose as boring and dry compared to poetry. It gets the idea across more clearly in most cases but the expression is less fun. Perhaps if the hads spoke in both poetry and prose or riddle and rhyme I'd like it a wee bit more. But as I said already, I like it. I like it a lot. 7.

I'm not sure if it was intentional or not but the lack of punctuation and capitalization together with the rhyme scheme lend the poem a childish feel but the words and tense give it a clashing more adolescent feel. I think that a rewrite with words more appropriate for a child and with a present tense or punctuation and capitalization could help. If the lack of the two is just laziness then shame on you. A poet should know that every part of a work plays into how it is read.

I like it. I once knew a woman who wrote an entire essay about Fred Astaire's hands--how lovely they must've been and how nobody ever looked at them. this reminded me of that. I like the first few images in particular. 9

I like it. as for present conversation here, I will say nothing ten times. there.

I LOOKED AT THAT WEBSITE AND HAD A GO AT UNDERSTANDING THIS AND I THINK I DO BUT ICARUS WAS NOT A GOD WAS HE MR PIG? I LIKE LINE 3 AND THE CONCEPT IS CLEVER BUT I ONLY WANT TO GIVE U 8 BCOZ THE SUBJECT MATTER IS TOO VAGUE. WHEN U GONNA READ MY STUFF HUH?

Nifty. naughty. nine.