DIFFERENT, IN A GOOD WAY

I'm sorry you were conceived, mr.tool. I speak that utterly sincerely. the world would be just a little sunnier if not only that poeme, but you and everything connected to you didn't exist. BOO! Boo-urns!

Good stuff

sorry but this is a turd, 3 IS ALL I CAN MUSTER

not one of your best but a winsome read all the same .....7

star of wonder, star of night, star with royal beauty bright, westward leading, still proceeding....

i'm sorry i read this poem.

things i like: cut glass accents wilder than a foxglove vivisected sky disappointemnt like a late picasso thing i don't: "always" 2 lines in a row please explain because i don't understand this line: Blurred in salt tears that burned the foxes blood,

nice and tight, now. goodjob.

There's no such word as "qualing" in my dictionary, but then again, I'm an American..

I'm sorry.

part of me wants to tell you to write about your observations instead of you imaginings, but then there's another part of me that thinks you maybe should get it all out in a journal first, and then maybe go read some literature, and then some literary criticism (www.poets.org is a good source) and then, after aeons of study, and a cathartic dawn of comprehension, then, and only then, should you re-endeavor to write an poeme. and another part of me thinks i should go bowling. who will win? i dunno.

BETTER THAN THE OTHER ONE, BUT ALAS STILL POO ...4 IMMORTALIZE BEAUTY IN PERSONNIFYING MORE THAN THE OBVIOUS, DESCRIBE HOW YOU FEEL, LOYAL TO YOUR FEELINGS, NOT THE RHYME STRUCTURE.....

oh god what have you done, my secrets out ..shit #7

Intriguing... a fabulous collection of haikus.

Which part of this having 18 syllabols didn't you grasp. The 1 or the 8? Don't get me wrong, because i bend the rules everywhere, but it's unacceptable when dealing with haikus. it's the foundation of the structure and when dealing in this arena it's critical.

You can eat the kids too. Use the same recipes as for pork, but apparently the palms of the hands are particularly good fried. On the whole, though, you can't go wrong with stir-frying. NEVER eat human brains, though.

Nice story, good use of a moral. Solid.

Fair enough

fresh.