how quaint. i give it an 8

mad applause for the 5th line

this is terrible. let me give you a piece of advice my english teacher always told me: show me, don't tell me.

i like your name tho by the way

ehhh i like the hammock better

Mine's better, sir.

it has big words :o) and great metaphorical value. i love it

where did he go?

You will become the ocean....

Its never your fault...always theirs..just remember that

I love your choice of words..."muted whispers" I really like this poem

mmm dreamy.. i like it

i think you should keep your drops of inspiration so you don't dry up... we would all miss you

i don;t understand, but the last line is good

i would rather take a cheese grater to my face than read this

must you mix the doves with Saturn? you'll rupture the mammal space continueum and force darwin to dry hump kubric in a swimming pool full of nestle's strawberry milk... what? lol.

this reminds me of my old style. it either has no point, or the message is so obvious it could slap a 6 year old in the face

the metaphorical quality is a joke. you lose-3

feels like drowning in the addictiveness of drugs

Who are you really?