regarding some deleted poem...	Ranger 62.252.32.15	27-Oct-06/4:34 AM
Tenning this out of sheer principle. Also because the first stanza is utter genius.
regarding some deleted poem...	drnick 24.176.22.254	27-Oct-06/8:40 AM
Why don't more people think like this?
Re: The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	drnick 24.176.22.254	27-Oct-06/8:52 AM
I'm not sure I deserved a response such as this, but thank you. This is very good, however im not completely sure of the over-all message you're trying to convey here. And evil is not a mystery, evil is me. I am evil, I am the DEVIL (woogy-boogy).
Re: Consider this by MacFrantic	Dovina 12.72.35.2	27-Oct-06/2:26 PM
Don’t “think twice about God or the Devil. We are fragments in a sea of ineffable words.” I feel that way often. Sometimes I think it’s impossible to talk about God or the Devil without resorting to analogy or metaphor. Some say that if anthropomorphic language is all we have in these matters it becomes added evidence for their non-existence. I disagree but see their point. Some good thoughts here, but could be more poetic, and at least called “prose poem.”
Re: Blue, Black & White by oneglove	Dovina 12.72.35.2	27-Oct-06/2:31 PM
Reads like a song. Call it a lyric and give it a tune.
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.250.132	27-Oct-06/4:27 PM
Very amusing. I loved the negroid bit.
Re: Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.250.132	27-Oct-06/4:29 PM
A bit of punctuation would have done no harm. But it's OK I suppose. Noy exactly profound that last line, is it?
Re: The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.250.132	27-Oct-06/4:31 PM
A combination of pretentiousness and ignorance. Boring too! I'll be generous and score it 4/10, no silly me 2/10.
Re: Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.250.132	27-Oct-06/4:32 PM
Utterly terrible. Total defecation. 10/10 for a good laugh!
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:30 AM
It's not that you are illiterate (a common failing among Americans, and one I am delighted to see you do not share) but that you are a very poor writer. "An ambulance was a mother’s womb The gunshot victim, in utero, waited to be birthed" Surely you can see that is pretentious twaddle? Why not write and condemn a country which allows unrestricted access to guns?
Re: The world's shortest poem by ALChemy	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:32 AM
Not short enough. It is wonderful to find someone who writes a two word poem AND ONE OF THEM IS SPELLED WRONGLY! An unbeatable achievment.
Re: Vote Goats by ALChemy	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:34 AM
Well, this poem is very badly written. It also contains poor grammar and syntax. And the primordial slime bit is a bit over the top. I am tempted to give it 0/10 just out of bitchiness but that would be unfair as it holds a kernel of truth in its clumsiness. So 5/10. You can't say fairer than that now can you, Al, dearie?
Re: One goal,Gotten&Changed by Hostileintent	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:37 AM
Embarrassingly badly written. The first stanza is doggerel. The use of "man" in the last line is appalling. I think you have found your true vocation in the armed forces. A gun will lie better in your hands than a pen. Happy shooting and killing!
Re: Fascists by Imago	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:40 AM
Trite. You probably don't even know what a fascist is. I shall be generous for a change: 1/10
Re: Jesus in a leisure suit by Imago	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:43 AM
This shows promise especially the references to the horrible car you drive. What a pity it is wrecked by these hideous lines... "to where I wanna be But my mind is floating off the berm" Why use a non-word like "wanna"? And what does a raised river bank have to do with it?
Re: Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	ALChemy 71.75.187.195	29-Oct-06/6:01 AM
Actually it's England that's on the wrong side of the street. We had cars first. Anything to prove your not our 51st state.
Re: The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	ALChemy 71.75.187.195	29-Oct-06/6:38 AM
The Tao of Dovina.
Re: Your Eyes by Dovina	Stephen Robins 89.241.203.90	29-Oct-06/10:22 AM
How do you do it?
Re: The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.236.219	29-Oct-06/5:01 PM
More illiterate crud.
Re: Brackish by <~>	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.236.219	29-Oct-06/5:05 PM
Deeply boring and pretentious. Over-punctuated and empty.