some deleted user
on The Merry Man by Teen14
31 Jan 2003, 7:19 PM
nice work
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
31 Jan 2003, 8:16 PM
what?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
31 Jan 2003, 6:54 PM
good work. good image
"I may have submitted this already?" lose that...no one will care. This is great.
your right about me. mostly everything i right sucks, has a simplistic rhyme scheme and classic cliches (thats what i think), but its fun.
its nice, i like the rhyme and the imagery. I think i understand what your saying >10 :)
Wow....that was amazing. Great detail. You must've poured your heart right out!
Outstanding! Truly and utterly fantastic!
LOL, sick but good
some deleted user
on haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY
31 Jan 2003, 8:10 PM
just for this waste of space and honesty i'll giv it a 6
never much to say about a haiku, but this is interesting
LOL, great stuff >10 :)
lol, dame those cats :)
Short, and Sweet. I must admit I love it! an 8 for you! But I think I would like to see it made a little longer, just a thought, =)
pretty good but the line has the joy of a 1000 little boys and girls sent a shiver down my spine -7-
Oh. I see. My friend had the same problem when his toucan died.