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thepinkbunnyofdoom on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin 31 Jan 2003, 4:47 PM
Next time try Drinking Vodka open cupboard, grab bottle sit back and enjoy
Ranger on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin 31 Jan 2003, 1:02 PM
Exactly.
Teen14 on Love spank by Shardik 31 Jan 2003, 3:33 PM
FDL!!! I love it!
Teen14 on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike 31 Jan 2003, 1:59 PM
That's really interesting and it makes a lot of sense, but it sounds more like a message than a poem.
Ranger on As I lay by Katie 31 Jan 2003, 12:42 PM
In my opinion this is too much just a letter. Split the lines a bit. I agree with brokenwing, this does have potential, but I don't think that this is fully complete. Keep at it.
thepinkbunnyofdoom on A Little Nightmare by Teen14 31 Jan 2003, 4:52 PM
Your close to caputing it but maybe a few less gomez runs at the beginning so that you build a sort of increasing frenzy.
thepinkbunnyofdoom on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik 31 Jan 2003, 12:17 PM
Got to agree with razorgrin this is quite swell.
Ranger on Elegy by Quarton 31 Jan 2003, 12:45 PM
Yep, I like it-it's a lyric, not a free verse as far as I can see. Good stuff. If you read my latest attempt you'll see that Icarus doesn't need his wings, he's got a plane.
Ranger on A Little Nightmare by Teen14 31 Jan 2003, 12:47 PM
Bold, straight to the point although I still don't know what the nightmare is.
Ranger on All I Feel by brokenwing 31 Jan 2003, 12:52 PM
'Fluorescent' Like the poem, it is one of your best.
Ranger on Despair by Caducus 31 Jan 2003, 12:56 PM
Caducus, perhaps you should split it up so that the 'forgive me's are in seperate stanzas from the rest? It might add a little to the structure.
Ranger on Lovers Game by scitz 31 Jan 2003, 12:58 PM
Pretty good. sado-masochism I believe has a wossname, hyphon type thing in between.
Ranger on some deleted poem 31 Jan 2003, 1:01 PM
I really like the poem. Third line should start "There's", other than that it's great!
Teen14 on some deleted poem 31 Jan 2003, 2:03 PM
All I can say is that was AMAZING! Great job!
Shardik on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike 31 Jan 2003, 2:50 PM
Now this is an 'other' . Thank god when we put on our end of the month donkey shows at your garage they are anything but common profanity. Hear that 'club stridex'? We are uncommonly profane. New and improved astringent for your blackheads, and as soon as the swelling goes down on my knees i'm going to prove it... has anyone seen my mineral oil?
Shardik on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin 31 Jan 2003, 3:00 PM
Fuck. I'm stumped...ahh does the hamster represent 'a furry eclectic olive' or the hibernating tread wheel activitie's of our soles. I'm fully aware that the ice tray represents our unity through division, but WHY! WHY SWEET JESUS cAN'T WE INVENT A FREEZER with a hamster escape hatch... i mean for the love of rodent's and plague and funny looking men with tits can't we find it in our soles to just listen to what our hamster friends are trying to say to us... "don't let friends ice skate without gloves and a hat"...it's really that simple.
Teen14 on Despair by Caducus 31 Jan 2003, 3:25 PM
Wow...what a great poem! That was excellent! I totally feel the dispair so I'm kind of sad now though. But all in all it was fantastic!
Teen14 on The Sunset Blvd. Cabbage limericks by Shardik 31 Jan 2003, 4:21 PM
I love limmericks hehe.
Teen14 on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin 31 Jan 2003, 1:57 PM
Wow...ummm...ok....that's really scary....wow.....wow
Shardik on wanker by w~* ATHENA *~w 31 Jan 2003, 2:38 PM
My father was an Incubus.