poetandknowit
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 5:40 PM
I thank you advance for your kind reply.
I thank you advance for your kind reply.
pure uranium, i here a ha singing take on me.
Zephyr seems out of place, but giving Eden moors makes up for it.
Why am I so happy I decided to get a glass of Scotch before coming on here?
Once a made a maple spagetti sauce spoon in woodshop in the 8th grade. It never touched the sauce only my ass.(my grammies weapon on my) then later when i was a junky...my dad would call me spoony? what a dick huh. That was the evolution of me and my spoons. I enjoyed your tale better.
Word.
Can you please tell me why you deleted my comment? It was both pertinent and insightful. Also, I was simply asking why you made the stylistic choice to cut off the gerund? Was it to achieve a reduction in language? I would appreciate in the future not to be cut off and deleted without an answer. If you go around placing harsh criticism in other writer's comment boxes, yet, delete yours, does that not make you a hypocrite? Again, welcome back to poemranker. I am glad to see you are a woman of principle.
Hey GW, your godson just got done thanking me for cooking him some home made fries with chocale milk, three year old heaven.
Just erase her comments (regarding cooti) that's what i do, because otherwise it becomes like arguing out the bing bang theory with an autistic 9 year old chinese version of a female andrew dice clay. i have a recording of her voice crying about leaving her poetry alone, from my cell phone , and her voice is like all choked up and serious like " gag..er ..leave my poetry alone um gag ..er". it's realy pretty absurd (cuz i'm like what poetry? you know?)..so i'm going to take that recording with this other earlier one and make this hilarious loop for my website..it will be quite the crowd pleasing mp3.
Sarah....I think it's time i've come clean and just told you the truth..i love you, but..well..i'm a flaming queen. Can you find it in your heart, to let me wear your underwear too.
this would make a fuck of a villanelle, h
she has no shield, and she's tossed off the veils (among other, more animate bits)...
Indeed, this is a bottle of diet horse piss.
i'm sorry, but this is the funniest poem i have ever read, ever. HOLY JESUS! HAAAAA! that is some funny shit. I hope you are not serious though...you're kidding right? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! DEAR GOD! they've stolen my thinking chair. i have to run, later <horus chases after the drunk ewoks trotting down the street with his toilet>o
well i like it... is that wrong?
okay, i get the gist, but it's just....umm...weird
Pretty good, I see some Looking back with regret
You must have edited this since last I spoke on it. Still something of a pity about the angels, but speaking of 'charred angels' is magnificent.
Why are you so intrigued by me? I've never said anything bad about you or your poetry, yet you continuously attack me. I am not going anywhere, so get it through your thick skull. Please, your definition of art is hilarious. What is art? Why are you the one to define it? Your poems are generic...you are average. Mine might be below average, but at least I am aware of it and I'm working on improving. But you think you are something special...why? Is it because you have a good grasp of the English vocabulary or perhaps you're quick with the dictionary. You try so hard to appear intelligent that instead you look like a fool. Use your fancy words and call people stupid, if that makes you feel good at the end of the day. But the bottom line is get a life....For God's sake just fucking ignore me. I don't write to you or waste my time writing you poems.
now that's the smack down.