razorgrin
on Head and Shoulders by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Jan 2003, 1:37 PM
Holy Shit! I'd believe it. I also heard that anti-dandruff shampoo causes baldness.
Different sound than usual. Reminds me of something. I don't remember what, save that it was good.
too much dancing, not enough death.
The title is adorable. I like trees better than people. Go Ents!!
interesting. I know how that goes, I do.
We have some issues, don't we?
fantastic, surreal. almost Epideictic.
Wow. What a fucking waste of time.
Best thing I've read on this site so far...
angry. good and angry. and good.
Funny stuff!
I have a tank helmet and a pilots helmet with the respiraTOR PLUg ins and everything. my friend has these two great uniform jackets, i think one is a submarine capts. the other a kgb dress uniform, or red guard rather..sweet finds. choice haiku, but radder title.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 12:24 PM
the last two lines need to be changed or deleted. Otherwise passable I suppose. A little dull.
Survivor a novel?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 2:09 PM
too elaborate.
too velvety.
rrr. no. don't like it. sorry.
and how many have you written? none. go read condom breaks....you think that's a haiku deserving of a zero? I deleted your comments because you were annoying and you kept changing your score.
crack! crack crack crack! :squaw: crack!
How intresing and unusual. You kept my attention and God only knows how hard that is to do these days. 8
I'm not very good at doing critiques. So here's my favorite number.
This rings of infedelity.
nice
nothing, as today: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j