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on crack of light by inka
10 Jan 2003, 6:51 PM
the title alone..gets a ten. lol.
some deleted user
on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84
10 Jan 2003, 11:23 PM
Why not start with a new title.
THE LAST TIME I SAW SOMETHING COME OUT OF THE MEADOW IT WAS THE WET DEAD LED, AND oh sorry, that my friend was essentialy my last straw. we must move past the meadows now...lets walk together for a moment behind the mere fields and meadows, amd yes even the birds gosh darnit let's get to THE MISERABLE FOREST OF DECREPID REDUNDANT SYMBOLIC TERMS AHHHHHHHH! forfeit, classical poetry died today my friend..you fought hard, but unfortunately art school one..i've seen the future and this aint it...have a 6 for prosperity though.
watch..into the air goes my flaming bag of puppy shit. plurp..
poo poo. doo doo. the same old same old..i know it's safe..i know it's refreshing, but if you did a google search on it..you'd faint.
"the powdered clounds are falling" i'm sorry, but you are smoking hard core crack, put the pipe down..take a minute before the powdery clounds come and carry you away.
yes. it sucks. i'm blind now, and mortally wounded. (i tried to complain, but it wouldn't let me, so here's my complaint)
are you trying to steal my gauze?
a drastic improvement. what part of michigan are you from..Troy. Southfield.Birmingkam, perhaps Saginaw? you're fired. have an 8
i took all of your poems and squeezed them into one doghnut, sorry
i couldn't resist.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/shen%20ring.mp3
i'm sorry, but nentwined..you stole my awards idea and took it to another level. lol. erotica lol. this is hilarious..everyones gonna want highlighted characters now. Both you and Settle, deserve a standing ovation.
Jesus?!
here's what it leads too.
sell out.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/stagnantlove.mp3
i wrote you song for your sexy achievement..enjoy
yours truly
http://gangbox.com/mp3/thorn%20apple%20t he%20baby%20fat.mp3
It would be a better poem if you took out all the self-censorship and put in the real swear words you were using. It would hit harder. Never self-censor. It cuts the oomph out of your poetry.
one of my favorites (the retard poem)..
i wrote you a love song..
because..well..i love you
http://gangbox.com/mp3/play%20chess%3F.m p3
our love is forever..oh can settle come with us..if we bring you a whole skinned babbit with a sack of potatoes?
I have no clue what thats supposed to say. Sure does look like it took a long time though.
i like it 8
superb..you've won an ostrich legged hut.. and a life time supply of wigs and lipstick...God's wife is a ' serious' poet...not a weed eater.
my last three poems are genius. 7.
Funniest poem ever? Yes.