razorgrin
on To Dark Angel by zagerXizer
9 Jan 2003, 11:54 AM
you do that.
So sad but well said. In places,
it borders on the melancholy but
overall, a very absorbing and vivid
piece. Deserves a high number.
this is silly.
The first five lines show promise. The end however, sucks so hard that no amount of cinnamon toast will quench my hate. grrr..0.
Hey Settle I think it's in our interests to spill the beans concerning the email cracking accusations. I've always said that honesty is the best policy in such matters. Jeremi, I am truely sorry for what Settle and I tried to do. Settle emailed me about cracking into your mail account because he heard that Ornella had done it and because I have the technical knowledge required to do so. Rest assured that we won't be making any further attempts to access your mail. Once again, my apologies. I hope you won't find it necessary to file a police report.
To Fool Or Knave:
Thy praise or dispraise is to me alike;
One doth not stroke me, nor the other strike.
This bears a striking resemblance to an event that occurred at Luncheon to-day. Dr. Marlowe, H. Fortesque and myself were enjoying a fine gammon steak on the lawn when I felt a troubling sensation in my breeches. To cut a long story short, Dr. Marlowe had to be put down, and I was found guilty of fraud in the First Degree.
Ranger
on I'm a homicidal kind of guy (spoof of every 'down-home' song you've ever heard) by Yardbird
9 Jan 2003, 8:11 AM
WA HA HA HA HA!!!!
not bad at all
-8-
No problem dude. I feel a bit guilty for starting all this shit anyway. Could we let it die?? Let's go back to the good old days of poemranker when I didn't have to hear about everyone's blossoming acting career and drug problem.
p.s. my roomies think ur kinda cut lol!
beautiful...great emotional expression and the end is honestly breathtaking....probobly what you were going for too
i hope there hands fall off, and they have to get there sisters to do the job for them.......
i would vote for 12 if i could :)
i like the first half of the second verse
two thumbs up
here i come to save the day! (oh wait..that was mighty mouse huh?) ohh i know...up up and away! 10!
Hi, vulcan
Been meaning to read more of your "stuff" and I hope it is all as good as this one. Loved the way you tied it all together in the last stanza. It made me think which I like a poem to do. Very impressive with great imagery and meaning. I give it a nine though I think a ten is not out of line. Oh...just what does a crocodile taste like? I do know they are edible and I'm sure the croc views us the same way:)
Justice
And you're right - the letter was for my clarity, but I felt you might as well be clear on it also.