Ranger
on some deleted poem
7 Jan 2003, 2:09 AM
Precisely.
Does 'fire' have one syllable or two? Fy-yur or Fire?
Exactly.
A shitload of anonymous votes!
Beautiful. 9. I knew all along that he isn't there.
This is nice. However, I still can't see the difference between free verse and prose with extra spaces. Will somebody please enlighten me?!?
great. have an 8.
I miss your work.
your writing has the heart and soul
of experience with adult angst.
when emotion evolves to action.
and looses its young apathy.
you're such a treasure.
I like this.
Marvelous!very nice!a poem with a real content and proper words to influence!really enjoyed!the 3rd stanza is a wonder!(Really!)10
What a flow of concept indeed!10!
Hur hur hur
*crackle* KILLER WHALE AT SIX 'O' CLOCK, REPEAT, KILLER WHALE AT SIX...AAAARRRRGGGHHHHH
Precisely.
Who 8 sumtotal pi?
Yes
Settle, we adore thee, etc etc
I was going to vote this a 10 but its too high its too high ( as alan partridge once said)
have a 9 and I know DD you think yourself as not a poet but me finks you is, and me finks your work has a certain mellifluence to it hey wot.
Quite the philosoher, Work sucks like a hooker have a nine
Ah - the old post-Christmas depression? This has intensity yet comedy. I hope it is not too autobiographical.
I'll see your shark and raise you
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Hi trisha welcome to p/r. I found upon reading this that i was forced to empathize with you and I wanted to see this from a less generic and more personal point of view, try and engage the emotion you want to write about and express it in a more ethereal way.
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