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on Deep Inner Pain by razorgrin
26 Dec 2002, 5:37 PM
Hee--yum! Juicy.
I want more night-gaunts.
8
Lovely, like your other poem...9
powerful, love the "lunatic tic tic," nice touch...7
The best thing you've ever written. GOLDEN-TIP..
awww...
ha* ha ***ha ^ha! smart bomb*
**you wont understand
this being too inclined for
scrotum
* this is my favorite
because i get to chirp
^an aLien shape beant on poopdom
and kontrol.
*** typo, hurpppppppp. bong toke
PPPPhweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewww. urp.a
i like this....but i cant quite figure out what you're saying...3
haha i like the ending...its wonderful...6
you actually went back to read this pimple faced, British semi-intellectual fag's comments....wow...that makes you a mullretard of the highest degree...BRAVO!!!...you've done it again lolipop...hahaaaaaaaaa...even a baboon has more intelligence thant that.......here's donation of $5 to the treatment of Downs Syndrome...just for you lolipop...hopefully they find a cure fast.
Artist: Kendra Smith Album: Five Ways of Disappearing Song: Valley of the morning sunhttp://www.lyrics.jp/lyrics/K00070001
Another night of meeting cheezy, hair-geled Persians who claim to be Italian and to drive Ferrari when in fact they have a leased 1997 BMW and own a wholesale store in downtown......what the hell is wrong with this town...huh?????? She turns up the music and starts shaking her ass...you maybe right I maybe crazy but it just maybe a lunatic you're looking for...that comment had nothing to do with your poem well because your haiku is....you're as dry as a soldier from the freeman army in Montana...notice how your humor only appeals to 17 years old girls
is this a short story or a poem??? anyway, here's a 5 for shaving your head and meditating for 5 hours.... Are you a big Richard Gere and Ricky Martin fan?
Are you the PETA spokesperson? It's funny how many people object to animal cruelty yet these people all wear leather shoes, jackets...carry leather wallets.
Shawny boy, wanna come over and fly my son's plane, and drive his remote controled car..it goes fast..they both do..yee haw..give me a call hey..i have the montery rock festival on dvd by pennebaker..it's the good stuff. believe that.jimi goes wah waredfyydtctydy with crunch.
your confessional is lacking pyrgates and enbrowning, you have no prawnes...and worst of aLL NO POOP DECK.therefore, you leave me no choice, but to offer you the plank complete with corn and whole peanuts. also we have a plank that comes in wood grain, hangover black and sesame seed. enjoy.r
fucking sheer spoon fed brilliance, and you're right, and i'll probably never be, but you're mine. i love your poetry. i could read it all day every day, and i do. i love you. more than the rocks that i was, or the fences i paint more than the [horse] more than the [sky net] your pen is a neon maniac blue. your stroll a hijack 'platinum' band that fits and squeezes. i'm just a handprint. caved.e
i like the idea, and i liked how you worded it...but it needs more...the stanzas seem too short to really pack a punch
It's pretty!
close.h