points for your fetish

dude....that was powerful and intense and true and amazing and a 10

Meat is to murder as Man is to machine

tsk. tsk. i was hoping for something involving your chinstrip, and more futility. bummer. great user name though.

sad and moving....? marks in odd places though...4

you got it all!!....definitely a 10

the chewry mispel just does this a disservice..thje poopin's fine though.

inxs has never sounded worse, and you left out..."i've got a new sensation" which is a dissappointment indeed.

Ask yourself this: How can something that intentionally spends its entire life in the nude be sentient?

i think this is definetly a winner Nick. the last stanza could of had a bit more hope? awareness is more than half of the bottle.

wow...this is simply amazing. i love "inhumanity served medium rare"...and your rhyme scheme...its breathtaking and intense and beautiful and a TEN!!

It's a bit stiff, but I'm feeling your vibe and I vote yes

My thoughtful friend we are now aquatic mammals! Our brand of debauchery is despised from here to there. The change starts with you, and it (unfortunately or not for us), ends there as well.

"ripe cherry ruptures" Lordie, lordie. i just bet.q

i dont know...somethings missing. theres no rhythm..no flow..and i dont quite see the whole picture...4

Could you edit it thinner and more verticle? to increase the structures longevity and quicken the read to memory.

oh man i love this...had to read it a few times to get it all straight, but its wonderful!!...8

It brings a whole new meaning to enlightenment

Is that you Dr.SUess?

that was fun.??