Ranger
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 6:23 PM
What the fuck's going on? This isn't the poem I responded to above. You sneaky devil, Settle...
that's a nice one.
long should be ping, because should be ring worm, while should be ajax (w/bleach) and and should be but.....most of all genius should be changed to Dessert.m
"convection zones" that's prudent. ash should be cash on tuesdays and hash every other fucking day, but sundays, see cause that would be wrong.d
you had my attention until you went "wassup", then i started picking my belly button and reading the globe again. what? no nitros? tsk. it's also a mind crunch to read and really bloated, you could of said it all with one sentence. "Stupid fucking rave full of complaisant retards, and then some." shame really. hope you're okay?
rough, immediate, alive, sensual.
keep going!
don't let the man get his hands on your junk.
gotta love this piece, 'cuz you've got the funk
ah, young romance.
and I just recieved a letter from my highschool sweetheart!
It all adds up to the divine number 7.
cuz I feel silly and whispy.
when the infant is cradled it stops it's baby wailing perhaphs un-rocked? last stanza's gold.
"snug lumpia" are better than pierogis any day. this was a great poem and still will be later, after 'was'.
needs more prada plugs, and a mustache ride 5 cents hat with a dime crossed out. and syke is spelled pike. piker. cheeky saint.e
i would of ended with spray paint your eyeballs for maximum confusion diffusion. than later... save the tongue ripping for an oral sex transfusion. trust me, i'm stupid.
you ever see best in show? "he likes soup" "i like soup" we could talk or not talk forever". we have lots in common.
There once was some aids in a crayon.
but since i was not yet a man
It melted my nipple
(now called a schmipple)
coloring, was never that simple!
why lordie! why! do i feel all dirty and mocked..my hoof shows not the beauty of my superman hair, nor my winning smile..only a...wait a minute? it's ...it's a bingo ball..i..i can almost see a number what? what..i cant se...GOT IT! B4! BINGO! BINGO! FUCK!? what do you mean she got it before me?..she was smelling her armpit and saying OH- RINGO!m
Deeeeeeelish-us! The 4th stanza is a happy wonderful thing.
Neither a fag nor a mosquito would want you after reading this shit. Are you kidding me? You actually go to art school. You are elementary and a bore and you're not funny at all. Unless of course you're using Warwick humour on us....hahaaaaaaaaaa...loser.
Charmingly vicious 7
Good use of imagery. I liked it....8
Hey! Down in front! damn people.