Ranger
on Junk by Bonehiss
20 Dec 2002, 1:48 PM
Quite good-possibly better as a lyric?
funny and works
line 9 typo, beautifull and true.??
FLASHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY___________
"foozle" sweet. preys gotta go back to pray. "empty acres take up more space then muddled cities", might works better moved to the last stanza. perhaps not, subways scare the hell out of me and so does the sky. usually.m
i should of finger banged you harder, but with my cactus, and a handful of dry mud. three hundred miles? that's not love sweety that's a mild crush. love, is a talking brain tumor and a late cable bill w/ a bit of movie popcorn in your hair..
take the question marks out, and than unfortunately every word, but two. ~ Trevor Greene. You see trevor, sometimes a blank letter can say so much more. like my mind is blank. use your fucking imagination for the love of a beutifull special young lady could you, please? PLEASE!. thanks, love horus8. p.s
merry christmas.
"as butterflies with nascent cyclones" that's visual. answer to question: no.c
jesus christ it's like butter fly day...butter fly day butter fly day look at mee coccooning on butter fly die...woah. can i just say you are obviously the happy person i could ever possibly read/meet. thanks.w
I'm with G. Alittle tweaking this could be perfect. You're a bad man with a keyboard! Cat walk of ego. Dooooood.
I still know nothing of music but what I hear. Self plug,last comment? I'll try to get to L.A. Next year. Home comp. on fritz. I'll need thos addresses later,again.
Well, I for one like it. It already has a lot of meaning, at least, I perceive meaning and theme where it may or may not exist. I am a great lover of disillusion and modern day angst. Irony and subtly sarcastic wit, though are only, it seems to me, for the somewhat tuned in and globally empathic.
Looks like you've been caught with your pants down and you forgot to take off your mother's pantyhose...Write another and get somemore girlfriends...and maybe a mistress boyfriend for kicks...
Good stuff, Master B.
kool.atleast it's not t.s eliot. is it? merry christmas and all that other arm funk.
yeah some guy in germany took out an ad to kill someone and someone showed up and they ate his weiner? and then they guy killed him. finally. cute hey! so i wrote that bachus nut thing, anyway i got an aud to fly to write now (drive really) semen's cellular? lol. on a more serious note/ peter called me last night with testicular cancer! swear to god. i was blown away, so i cheered him up and told him the german weiner story and said at least he's still got us, chemo, his weiner, and a nut still"..how fucking weird is life..peter? wow, mind numbing..anyway, i had him rolling in like minutes he was all "jeremi, i have testicular cancer" and i could hear his voice break, and there was like this long pause, then i said all like shocked BOTH!? and then there was this other pause. then we both started laughing hysterically it was really moving.>
Yes, needs some polish, but I love the ideas behind this. Last two lines are great. Encore!
I'm with G. Alittle tweaking this could be perfect. You're a bad man with a keyboard! Cat walk of ego. Dooooood.
Had no idea you could bend that way - 8