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New Life Drug on missing time by Bill Z Bub 21 Dec 2002, 4:44 PM

This is very lovely

Plasticgirlwithgun on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub 21 Dec 2002, 2:36 AM

Cellphones are lame.Your poem is rather good though.

Plasticgirlwithgun on some deleted poem 21 Dec 2002, 2:33 AM

"forgooten"...never heard that before.

scitz on Merry days. by Plasticgirlwithgun 21 Dec 2002, 2:50 AM

Here's some humbugs to suck on you miserable git. 5

wOrnella Mutiw on Merry days. by Plasticgirlwithgun 21 Dec 2002, 4:02 AM

You're quite ignorant, but I won't hold it against you since you're plastic. If you read carefully you will note that I am not from Oklahoma but from a state West of Oklahoma. I actually have been to Oklahom...lovely place...no spineless, annoying, hags like you floating around. Enjoy the egg nog and honey bun!

scitz on some deleted poem 21 Dec 2002, 4:38 AM

Keep this self effacing mood up, its creasing me up

scitz on The Sons and Daughters of the New Light by Bonehiss 21 Dec 2002, 5:12 AM

I read it -all- and am exhausted, I think you could make your point cleared more concisely, the 6 mins it took to study it is just the start now i have to think about it before voting. Hope you will answer any questions if i have any?

scitz on some deleted poem 21 Dec 2002, 5:14 AM

Catfight ! I dont know whether this was intended to be funny -it is- and at least its original/cult -6-

scitz on lost by Katie 21 Dec 2002, 5:15 AM

innocent, sweet, you are obviously a seed of a writer but its quite refreshing to see work from the heart warts and all

scitz on Frozen Angel by Ranger 21 Dec 2002, 5:18 AM

This is beautiful, ahead of your years ranger 8

god'swife on some deleted poem 21 Dec 2002, 11:48 AM

I get the feeling your one of those writers who doesn't start with a pile and then has to sort it out. The 'born writer' am I right? My only criticism here is the use of retreat twice. you have the wave retreating, can't it just carry your image, or steal your images, or wash away your image? As each wave retreats My image is carried out to sea I am fading into the waters I know you have the talent do develop the image better. A strong poem, as usual.

wOrnella Mutiw on some deleted poem 21 Dec 2002, 4:40 PM

lipstick lesbo...if you must know...smile...Santa is watching.

wOrnella Mutiw on pee haiku by New Life Drug 21 Dec 2002, 1:33 AM

Pissing....when you really have to go can be somewhat of an orgasmic experience...your haiku on the other hand is not!

wOrnella Mutiw on lost by Katie 21 Dec 2002, 1:37 AM

"Through are pain"...change that. For your age it's not bad, but try to experiment with different subject matters. There's more to life than guys....like smurfs.

wOrnella Mutiw on Merry days. by Plasticgirlwithgun 21 Dec 2002, 1:39 AM

a little bitterness is always good but not in your poetry because it sucks........2

New Life Drug on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub 21 Dec 2002, 4:42 PM

I love downtown buses hehe. I just don't like it when the driver tells you too put your feet down off of the seat or gives you a hard time.. or mentally ill riders. The club part is a good drop-off too. Nice...and the last stanza is a great ending. 9

wOrnella Mutiw on pee haiku by New Life Drug 21 Dec 2002, 4:45 PM

Wal Mart is running a sale on adult diapers...HUGGIES

-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 21 Dec 2002, 8:50 AM

I like your new persona, -=Dark_Angel=-. Although before covering this NASA material you really should have taken another gander at my NASA pedofeelia poem.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on lost by Katie 21 Dec 2002, 10:32 AM

change the last word to 'beak'

lunar on RMAED by deep-as-a-puddle 21 Dec 2002, 1:31 PM

wow this is sooooo randomm! love it! xx