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Ranger on some deleted poem 16 Dec 2002, 4:17 AM
Where did this one come from?????
Ranger on some deleted poem 16 Dec 2002, 4:18 AM
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<~> on some deleted poem 15 Dec 2002, 9:01 PM
thus spake the book of Ian, chapter 2, verse...uh...
horus8 on some deleted poem 16 Dec 2002, 12:46 AM
line ten is a bowl of nuts and a drunk great grandma crackin-em for you ...Art+politics=power! power!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dc is better than ac just ask tesla.s
Ranger on some deleted poem 16 Dec 2002, 4:16 AM
See comment for Pain 5
horus8 on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 15 Dec 2002, 9:48 PM
choice read.
Ranger on some deleted poem 16 Dec 2002, 4:16 AM
Hnur, hnur, hnur
<~> on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 15 Dec 2002, 9:09 PM
fucking finally. thank you. one that's not pathetic. p.s.--like the titular device.
Ranger on My Friend? by Blade 16 Dec 2002, 4:48 AM
Oh, and 'gonareha' is an STD-not something you'd want to get everyday (although if you got it everyday, you'd have to be damn busy!)
Caducus on Am I Still Here? by Ranger 16 Dec 2002, 4:56 AM
This is a seminal work from you, And i my friend have something secret I have learned from this -congrats. ( I think the last 3 lines deserve more impact) I will think of it, scrambled thoughts at the moment =9= PS i might write something happy
Ranger on some deleted poem 16 Dec 2002, 4:40 AM
Yeah...I really like this-"Your lover's smile, I guess/Or ten million pounds gaining interest" Very good.
Ranger on A Part Of Me Dies by Caducus 16 Dec 2002, 4:43 AM
I really like your style, but could you write something a bit more, well, happy?
<~> on some deleted poem 15 Dec 2002, 9:00 PM
i think you must be young. maybe not innocent. read more. forget him. (or her--whatever) think more. make comparisons mentally. then write. and if it's fluff, keep trying until it's not. as a point of reference, check out emily dickinson: http://www.bartleby.com/113/100.html i think that's where you're aiming. and, keep trying. but think more than you write.
Bill Z Bub on some deleted poem 15 Dec 2002, 9:06 PM
reading this is payment enough, isn't it? what a pantload of self-righteous, smug, childish, ignorant twaddle. pfui.
<~> on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 15 Dec 2002, 9:10 PM
oh, technically, still summer--10 days left, and whutnot. call me a pedant.
<~> on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT 15 Dec 2002, 9:13 PM
why? you give no reason. will i be arrested for buying hot merch off the back of one? are they poorly driven? are they forming a new hybrid-gang--sort of a C.H.U.D. but rubber and metal? you must give flesh if you want grey to function. bones are not enough. your voice cannot be made out unless you speak. in complete thoughts.
Ranger on some deleted poem 16 Dec 2002, 4:18 AM
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Ranger on My Friend? by Blade 16 Dec 2002, 4:46 AM
HAA HAA HAA! Ah, mirth.
<~> on First Site by angel_uy 15 Dec 2002, 9:27 PM
check out emily dickinson: http://www.bartleby.com/113/100.html i think that's where you're aiming. also, 'site' should be 'sight'. very different meanings.
horus8 on some deleted poem 16 Dec 2002, 1:01 AM
mad magazine look out. i've wept in my curry. no the curry leaks from me..