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ciantu on Inside by Jagang 5 Dec 2002, 2:34 PM
nice
god'swife on sleep at 2:24 by blackball 5 Dec 2002, 10:36 PM
Typo darling.
ciantu on The Considerate Lover by Tascobar 5 Dec 2002, 2:37 PM
eiw cool
Bachus on ending by Limness 5 Dec 2002, 10:27 PM
no shit.t
ciantu on Rich and the wall by INTRANSIT 5 Dec 2002, 2:36 PM
why?
ciantu on some deleted poem 5 Dec 2002, 2:39 PM
really
ciantu on Jockey by betty swallox 5 Dec 2002, 2:43 PM
twas stupid
ciantu on A load of bollocks - literally!!! by Yardbird 5 Dec 2002, 2:41 PM
hahahahaha!!!!!!
ciantu on Contempt by Britpop 5 Dec 2002, 2:40 PM
i should hope not
ciantu on some deleted poem 5 Dec 2002, 2:43 PM
why cake and not steak think of all the listeria going around
Quarton on some deleted poem 5 Dec 2002, 6:20 PM
Very descriptive and very original piece. A narrative type poem that I enjoyed a lot. The last stanza is perfect and I am impressed by your imagery. All in all, a very good poem.
Quarton on Glassblowers by Christof 5 Dec 2002, 6:24 PM
Really liked this one. Short and meaningful with great rhythm. One typo, "gawp" should be "gawk."
horus8 on Deep Inner Pain by razorgrin 5 Dec 2002, 9:03 PM
tomorrows headline.."man hijacks plane with saran wrap"!? he could use it as rope and a weapon..tie them up, then let them pick either smothering or bleeding to death..weird wild stuff. sorry about your arm and your cookies. 8.o
god'swife on The cowards way out by MakenzieNy 5 Dec 2002, 9:41 PM
Fuck, I am not sure it's that cowardly at all. My nephew killed himself, same as your fellow here, drugs and all. Jesus, you know, it really takes some balls. Besides that, your poem starts off very well and then kind of tapers off like a guttering wick. I would try and revise if I were you, though plainly I am not. I think if you tried replacing 'cowards way out' with something felt instead of believed you come to place so close it would hurt. Good luck.
god'swife on Our Love Was Meant to Be by MakenzieNy 5 Dec 2002, 9:43 PM
Don't tell, show. Pictures dear, that's the key, not feelings exposed but snapshots.
Bachus on TRIBUTE TO A FRIEND by Nicholas Monson 5 Dec 2002, 9:49 PM
better. i like imps...they can be excessive indeed.??
Bachus on HATTIE by Nicholas Monson 5 Dec 2002, 9:51 PM
what a tart. ha! that's funny.8. sink? could you?d
Bachus on Reptiles & Dust - Part Three (Forty-three through Sixty-three) by Wulf 5 Dec 2002, 10:31 PM
48, and 54 were great..the whole thing was just totally fucking like hanging out over a crack in a volcano, sucking gas and seeing visions...this was loads of fun..long as fuck, but entertaining and revealing. a must read on poemranker. 10! congradulations.
Bachus on rules by roses are read 5 Dec 2002, 10:35 PM
you know what's fun about mouth fucking? the teeth, pudgie.@
Bachus on some deleted poem 5 Dec 2002, 9:44 PM
Sir who? exactly. lose the excess question marks. well you were right about one thing. it is an ode. i guess you had to be there though huh.? i will wait to vote on this. perhaps forever. why you might ask? because DAMN IT MAN! no eye drowning is aloud..ha lol just fucking with you. here's a six..i'll read your others it can only get better...your rhyming pattern was almost cool though. see you at your other poems..