Caducus
on late night activities by sooz
28 Nov 2002, 1:46 AM
mmmm shenanigans in the sack, great for thursday mornings, scrap that - any morning
Thankyou
Pretty good pie, let me slice some for you, 7 ok?
Try coming from a different angle when writing of love, love is indefinable, everyone has different defintions, delve deep whats yours? let me taste from your creative cauldron
yes
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
28 Nov 2002, 3:28 AM
wassup, great poem. U got a gift with wordz, keep writin.
-FaTz
Oh come on!You mean to tell me that a witless piece of crap like this can get to number 1, and something with the sheer genius of cleverdevice's 'A Limerick by me' can't even scrape the top 15 before it's mercilessly ripped to pieces by 'proper' poets???"!!This really is an insult.Although I am quite glad a stupid poem can get in the top 15, as it gives hope to the rest of us.5
Am I missing something? My initial reaction upon reading this was one of disbelief of how this has so many 10s, despite the poignance of the last line.Is there some deep metaphor here,and if so PLEASE could someone explain it for the benefit of us peasants.
Or have I just made a complete twat of myself?5 for confusing me
Genius, and there was me thinking elephants had knees all along
Nice one.
The best thing about this 'limerick' is that the third and fourth lines are longer than the first, second and last lines.
Its Different from the usual *6*
What the hell is going on here, then:
http://www.zootorah.com/ZooRabbi/gallery
I though this was going to be a Ron Mueck tribute ah well.
Van Damme it ! heres 6<---------
Yer pie fed knobber
so/so it needs identifying as a poem or lyric, try it as a lyric and wrench the heart more, as it stands its mediocre, could be good though, play with it (the poem) that is
Right, this is gd stuff, but being a huge muse fan I'm concerned by your use of their lyrics.Doesn't actually count as plaguerism as you haven't used the song title, instead replacing it with 'drag in baby'...
Raggy!