Caducus
on It's All 'Cause I Love You by Tigger8023
28 Nov 2002, 9:34 AM
cheesy but harmless i guess
Ah, leave her the fuck alone you callous basterds. If you haven't got anything nice to say SHUT THE FUCK UP!
Look at this. Not one asswipe who voted low had enough guts to say why.
Nice one.
The purpose of this site is to submit your poetry to be critiqued and voted upon. it's not a support group for whiny brats who don't have any real problems. If she writes a piece of utter shite, then she'll get the votes and comments that go along with it. if she wants group hugs, she may take her shit elsewhere.
hey guys, know what? the poem this is attached to sucks moose balls.
hedwig and the angry inch.8.b
change cletus to clitus and digby to dooby...change bowy to BOY! and change that fact that your a woman to...oh ? you can't can you? and your trailor really is a mansion..your a fucking sell_out. loved the poem though.....9.s
Hopefully this is based on the classic cartoon rather than the film, which incidentally I haven't seen yet, but I have heard is crap.
In reference to line 4, what is hame?
It looks like you're running out of steam with this red neck joke. Who would have thought that a character based entirely on a single misunderstood sarcastic comment would lack lasting comedy potential?
Kind of 'supermarket poetry' with the wrong price tag on it
America gave us Baywatch !
It also gave us David Hasselhoff !
America gave us Star Trek
America gave us a fascinting insight on how to bury a cigar,
America gave us Cowboys
America gave us Hawaii five o and Magnum.
Thank God almighty real or not for giving us a big fuckoff ocean to seperate us,
hey guys who fucking cares theirs only 1 American I gotta problem with and he thinks Macedonias a fucking dance at a wedding.
rest, deep breath, Think of John Lennon, and congratulate each other on breaking the 'Guiness book of records' for the most comments on any poetry website ( hey if thats true melinda 50/50s fair huh?
This is a pile of poo.That's all I have to say on the matter I'm afraid.
Biting!
My mum wants to know what your doing tonight?
She then wants to papercut you to death with a copy of this, (if she can get up off her fat ass that is)
As usual brilliant and its not even your best =====8======