Poemranker [most recent comments (46981-47000)]

Bachus on jane by roses are read 20 Nov 2002, 10:17 AM

so.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on jane by roses are read 20 Nov 2002, 11:47 AM

You like to watch, don't you?

sliver on some deleted poem 20 Nov 2002, 11:17 AM

you would tire quickly, I think.

sliver on The Trail by ThoughtfulSoul 20 Nov 2002, 11:19 AM

Trust not what you see-Go with what you know

Bachus on some deleted poem 20 Nov 2002, 10:12 AM

never before would i have thought. now that's all i do, funnilly enough..you don't. piss poor wouldn't click for me so i'm going to go with "the stink of sex ass" and call it.

Bachus on Where Is Happiness by BUFFY0BSESSED 20 Nov 2002, 10:25 AM

happiness is you gaining another hundred pounds so not only will you not be able to see your penis, but your feet will be gone too.

Bachus on Now I Know by BUFFY0BSESSED 20 Nov 2002, 10:28 AM

i hate you. and your fat and ugly. enjoy your stay...we serve danishes at noon.

sliver on Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl 20 Nov 2002, 10:46 AM

I wonder why people have no friends. Welcome to slam the striving poet night.It is a little difficult to read, but good sentiment. keep writing,lil girl

poetandknowit on my goat by joey 20 Nov 2002, 10:47 AM

Is it an African goat? also, what does "ur" mean. Is that teenage hipster speak.

sliver on Now I Know by BUFFY0BSESSED 20 Nov 2002, 11:02 AM

happiness isn't a gift, it's something you earn. If you can't give it to yourself- no one can force it on you

sliver on some deleted poem 20 Nov 2002, 11:14 AM

a path I have seen cleared through the deadfall of my dreams. Excellent imagery.

horus8 on give by joey 20 Nov 2002, 11:32 AM

i hope your monkeys eat this too. does your mom know your diddling on line?

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on The Trail by ThoughtfulSoul 20 Nov 2002, 11:52 AM

What a terrifying twist. Who would have thought your salvation would turn out to be your downfall? NOT ME THAT'S FOR SURE!!!11

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 20 Nov 2002, 11:58 AM

I often have difficulty balancing work with my busy social life.

god'swife on Now I Know by BUFFY0BSESSED 20 Nov 2002, 12:07 PM

Happiness is result of bio-chemistry, and it's over-rated. This poem is awful.

Bachus on Pantoum by Moss 20 Nov 2002, 12:10 PM

your first problem is the use of pink, your second was the winter thing. the third apparently was looking for your face in the sky, when it's really in your hand.t

Bachus on Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss 20 Nov 2002, 12:16 PM

i watched my gradfather die of parkinson's disease, and it was funnier than any sitcom on the air at the time..what is time? something that obviously scares the shit out of you...now we're even, because the thought of you teaching old people creative writing when you can barely grasp that notion let alone the meaning.. scares the piss out of me, but just for a second. nice orange hill.

Bachus on some deleted poem 20 Nov 2002, 12:19 PM

i would but there's a three inch hair growing off of your left nipple.

UnityMitford on The Sea by Moss 20 Nov 2002, 8:56 AM

i hate to dissent, but if i have to read one more goddamn poem about the sea, i might have to kill a kitten on my way home from rehab tonight.

god'swife on Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss 20 Nov 2002, 8:56 AM

I don't like this poem but I think it qualifies. Five tercets, a final ququatrain and two rhymes.