And no birds!

Jesus, what is it with you people and birds? Have you been hanging out with the guy that writes ... poems? This sounds like a weak attempt at a corny motivational speech. And now for your entertainment pleasure we present: "Church sermons gone Bad."

Well, I suppose it is better than writing to feel dead. At least if you did that, this would be a better attempt. You know, Christof has a ton of poems about birds. Look him up. Plus, he has never had a mullet.

My poetry is better than your poetry!

I would remove "spent"? I think the word "scraps" is a bit misleading, especially when implied with stove. The last stanza is excellent.

Seriously now. This site is for real poems.

Now, I am really not sure that I know how to read poetry, especially poetry that is this bad, but I don't think you really understand friendship. I think you need to experience things before you actually write about them.

Why do you have the //// in there? Why not. >>>> or <<<< or ^^^^^ or }}}} or [[[[ or |||||||? What to they add to this here poem? And when are you going to write another triangle? Should I post the response you should have said to him as a poem. Maybe titled: If Z was in here right mind this is what she should have said to the furnace fixer?

I can tell you are sad so I hate to say this, but I think you stole a line from Nights in White Satin by the Moody Blues....people tell me thoughts they cannot defend....Plus s4 reminds me of a Pink song.... Hazard to Myself I think is the one.

And Abba, what does L-G-O mean?

I see you are not dead yet.

I. I. I. Me. Me. Me. Really this is nothing more than a statement without any images. One screwed up sentence of "Oh Woe, Woe is Me." Not a poem worth anything.

Have you no honor man; letting Settle anonymously rank your work so you can have the best and the worst. You should remove these at once or run and hide in shame. He has already stated his intentions and is going crazy with the blue line. A respectable man would do something about it.

Although this poem has a lost sense of place, it more than makes up for it in depth. Best poem on the site. Hands down.

GW is suffering from the Razorgrin to Shin complex and will give anything you write a ten. And while this is an interesting piece and quite funny at times, it is just that: at times.

I love the Discovery Channel

will trampolines

This is pretty cool....

I think this is just precious and it made me smile.

I like this. It makes me think about my own "sisters"