Poemranker [most recent comments (47021-47040)]

-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 19 Nov 2002, 9:45 PM

my velouria, my vel-our-ia

-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 19 Nov 2002, 9:44 PM

proofread

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on His Mother's Son by vulcan 20 Nov 2002, 5:33 AM

shattered, atrocious, erotic, defenceless, dangling, bare, savage, chaotic, gay, harrowing, physical, famous, desperate, too, many, fucking, adjectives, asswipe.

vulcan on The Sea by Moss 20 Nov 2002, 1:00 AM

tender!7

Nicholas Jones on Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss 20 Nov 2002, 1:34 AM

I'm unconvinced this is actually a villanelle, but then I'm an incorrigible pedant. It is pretty good, though; the first stanza is by far the best. Have you been reading the great Dylan? He was fond of his womb images.

joey on Horse Burgers by flanners 20 Nov 2002, 4:51 AM

looks like an anthology poem to me......how could you bring back the memories......but allnot that bad, as half caste shows!!! hehe, interesting poem here!!!

Caducus on When It's All Over by BUFFY0BSESSED 20 Nov 2002, 4:53 AM

No offence intended but it goes on a bit and becomes tedious as you keep making the same point, and the point in which your making is not sold poignantly enough for it to move me.

-=SeTTle=- on Absence by newdawnfades 19 Nov 2002, 10:34 PM

IF IT WORKS KEEP IT IF NOT CHANGE IT. THERE ARE NO HARD AND FAST RULES TO ANYTHING WORTHWHILE. FURTHERMORE, JOY DIVISION FUCKING ROCKS THE FUCKING WORLD.

-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 19 Nov 2002, 10:39 PM

ICOULDESCAPETHISFEELING,WITHMYCHINAGIRL,WAKEUPMORNINGSWHERESMYLITTLECHINAGIRLIFEELWRETCHEDLIKEITWASMARLONBRANDOWHENILOOKATMYCHINAGIRLVISIONSOFSWASTIKASINMYHEADANDFANSFOREVERYONEITSINTHEWAAAAAAAYOFMYEYES(WHITEOFMYEYES)YOUSHOULDN'TMESSWITHME,I'LLRUINEVERYTHINGYOUAREYOUKNOWI'LLGIVEYOUTELEVISION,I'LLGIVEYOUEYESOFBLUE,I'LLGIVEYOUMENWHOWANTTORULETHEWORLDGAHHHHHGAY

-=SeTTle=- on untitled#3 by darby pyn 19 Nov 2002, 10:02 PM

INSERT WORDS YOU LEFT OUT. SERIOUSLY, IN THIS CASE EVERY FORMALISM IS YOUR GREATEST ALLY.

-=SeTTle=- on Where Is Happiness by BUFFY0BSESSED 19 Nov 2002, 9:50 PM

GUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

poetandknowit on missing you by Goose 19 Nov 2002, 10:14 PM

I agree with Christof Cad and goose.

<~> on some deleted poem 19 Nov 2002, 10:29 PM

howza bout a colon instead of a semi in the penultimate line, b.o.b.?

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on my goat by joey 20 Nov 2002, 5:26 AM

Your poeme is this good: quite

-=SeTTle=- on It started with a kiss by little_angel_maria 19 Nov 2002, 9:46 PM

This exactly what I can't stand about girls. You reek of death and weakness. Some of you, some of the time.

-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 19 Nov 2002, 9:59 PM

APCRAY BIT INCERESAY

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on The Sea by Moss 20 Nov 2002, 5:29 AM

You, Sir, are not alone: I also find barnacles exciting. Cupcake?

-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 19 Nov 2002, 10:27 PM

oh god spinning hurf ugh blroorroggghgh duh

Nicholas Jones on a genius by moonUnit 20 Nov 2002, 1:43 AM

Are you the child of Mr. Zappa? This is a nicely melancholic, elegiac poem, and it uses the word shoulderblades. Excellent.

-=SeTTle=- on confused by little_angel_maria 19 Nov 2002, 10:01 PM

ASSUMING THIS IS A JOKE. SORRY I MUST. WHY NOT DO A POEM ABOUT A MESSED UP ANGEL OR SOMETHING OTHER THAN SOME FAG CALLED 'LOGAN'